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I sit here and listen
As I look in your eyes
Is it true what your saying
You want me for you wife

I can hardly believe it
I'm only 16 years old
I feel in my heart
I cant let go

Something tells me
Im just too young
With so much more
To look to.

Should I accept it
Should I say no
Do you think Im ready?
I didnt think so

I sit her and whisper
As you look in my eyes
Im not ready yet
To be a bride
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Proposal

Contributed by Dakota on Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 11:14:34 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

I sit here and listen
As I look in your eyes
Is it true what your saying
You want me for you wife

I can hardly believe it
I'm only 16 years old
I feel in my heart
I cant let go

Something tells me
Im just too young
With so much more
To look to.

Should I accept it
Should I say no
Do you think Im ready?
I didnt think so

I sit her and whisper
As you look in my eyes
Im not ready yet
To be a bride

Copyright © Dakota ... [ 2005-06-06 23:14:34]
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Re: Proposal (User Rating: 1 )
by pUnKa_RaCh on Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 11:24:00 PM AEST
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wow, you received a proposal at 16? lol far out, yes i agree, i think you are a tad too young, live for yourself & enjoy being young
but anyways back to the point, i liked ur poem, it was honest

Re: Proposal (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 11:34:58 PM AEST
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No wonder he wants u as his bride 'cause u r a very smart person for your age.
Keep that atitude and you'll get there when your time is right.
luv, huggs,
emy

Re: Proposal (User Rating: 1 )
by Triple on Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 11:54:07 PM AEST
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I can feel your love for him and your fear of such a thing. Live for now, if he truly loves you; he will be your groom and you his bride.

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