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Array ( [sid] => 97121 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Sweet Revenge [time] => 2005-06-06 23:22:16 [hometext] => dont worry i didnt kill anyone: written during extreme emotion [bodytext] => i want to corner you
and slowly cut you appart
pick your flesh from the bone
watch the blood flow down my arms
as you fall appart
i will smile with satisfaction
as i look at a new person
limp and lifeless
you will stare back at me
with never changing eyes
full of fear and rotting flesh
i will hide the evidence
and walk away from your grave
this didn't have to happen
you just made the wrong choice
"the quiet ones
they are the ones to fear"
never has that been more true
that i have proven to you
you killed me so-
i was forced to kill you too
revenge has never been sweeter
my black rotting heart is almost at rest
just one thing left
and i will sleep silent in my coffen
i have one more life to take
the life of the one you have chosen [comments] => 1 [counter] => 154 [topic] => 48 [informant] => ivoryA [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Sweet Revenge

Contributed by ivoryA on Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 11:22:16 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

i want to corner you
and slowly cut you appart
pick your flesh from the bone
watch the blood flow down my arms
as you fall appart
i will smile with satisfaction
as i look at a new person
limp and lifeless
you will stare back at me
with never changing eyes
full of fear and rotting flesh
i will hide the evidence
and walk away from your grave
this didn't have to happen
you just made the wrong choice
"the quiet ones
they are the ones to fear"
never has that been more true
that i have proven to you
you killed me so-
i was forced to kill you too
revenge has never been sweeter
my black rotting heart is almost at rest
just one thing left
and i will sleep silent in my coffen
i have one more life to take
the life of the one you have chosen

Copyright © ivoryA ... [ 2005-06-06 23:22:16]
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Re: Sweet Revenge (User Rating: 1 )
by Triple on Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 11:51:10 PM AEST
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Wow so full of rage. I know how you feel, I do like the poem. The one that hurt you forget. You will be ok

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