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[sid] => 97190
[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => in love with an idol-god-man (we all know how it is.)
[time] => 2005-06-07 15:53:32
[hometext] => criticism much appreciated... please.
[bodytext] => god of all men, perfectly statuefied and placed on a pedestal of gold by the one the one of your many adoring screaming idealistic fans (of you, the everyday man.) idealistic unrealistic diamond bubbles en casing the frame of the idolized you you and the mask created bye your adoring, gathered en masse about the base of your throne. cast low, the so many uncountable infinitely dirty pebbles on their insignificant beach. one pebble daring so much as to glance at her one-true-love caught his eye and saw. and sievelike, it all vanished. the Idol, once more perfect. "no-flaws-and-I-truly-know-his-heart-the-perfection-of-it-all-with-his-soul-as-pure-and-loving-as-my-mother-with-an-infant-me-in-her-arms." and then the implosion. one idol-eye shifts and catches the one adorant with its stabbing-uncaring glare and the diamond bubble shatters with the crash of the pedestal and its ideals with the transformation of the perfect to the everyday. and she smiled to see the flawed being for what it was and saw that it (the god-man) was the lie of the universe-galaxy-world. and she deserved better. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 159 [topic] => 24 [informant] => _myonlyone_ [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LoveRemembered )
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