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To little to late
Things moving fast
Have to wait

I'm on My way
Cant get there from here
I'm scared of the dark
I have no Fear

Up is down
Down is up
You're a fathful dog
You're a lying pup

You give your all
You have nothing to give
You're going home
You have no place to live

You cant run your life
Dont run mine
You're a wonderful person
You're so un-kind

Your so sweet
You leave a bitter taste in my mouth
If I'm going north
Why am I walking south

So many things
Going through My mind
Lets sit down and talk
I dont have the time [comments] => 5 [counter] => 252 [topic] => 21 [informant] => withpen_inhand [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 20 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

Ramblings of My Mind

Contributed by withpen_inhand on Tuesday, 23rd July 2002 @ 06:08:12 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

To much to soon
To little to late
Things moving fast
Have to wait

I'm on My way
Cant get there from here
I'm scared of the dark
I have no Fear

Up is down
Down is up
You're a fathful dog
You're a lying pup

You give your all
You have nothing to give
You're going home
You have no place to live

You cant run your life
Dont run mine
You're a wonderful person
You're so un-kind

Your so sweet
You leave a bitter taste in my mouth
If I'm going north
Why am I walking south

So many things
Going through My mind
Lets sit down and talk
I dont have the time

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Re: Ramblings of My Mind (User Rating: 1 )
by lil_hummingbird on Tuesday, 23rd July 2002 @ 06:12:31 AM AEST
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heyyyyyyyy your mind rambles like mine! good write

Re: Ramblings of My Mind (User Rating: 1 )
by chatabox on Tuesday, 23rd July 2002 @ 06:31:59 AM AEST
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its all topsey turvey isnt it, just like my mind too.
lovely write though.

Re: Ramblings of My Mind (User Rating: 1 )
by humphdj on Tuesday, 23rd July 2002 @ 07:01:00 AM AEST
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Great write..........loved it!

Rgds
Dave

Re: Ramblings of My Mind (User Rating: 1 )
by Chrissie on Wednesday, 24th July 2002 @ 05:08:30 PM AEST
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Excellent..I loved this too..
Chrissie

Re: Ramblings of My Mind (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Wednesday, 24th July 2002 @ 08:30:58 PM AEST
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Good write, with pen in hand..lol
Jenni

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