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[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => Premonition
[time] => 2005-06-09 10:49:46
[hometext] => Had a dream last night that has me freaked out!!
[bodytext] => Dining with the corpse of my past
the space and time in between seems so vast
The reflection in the mirror is one of worry
these memories coming back in a hazy flurry
An innocent vision meant to disarm
suddenly has me panicked and full of alarm
Can't shake this feeling that something is wrong
this gut-wrenching sensation I feel is so strong
I need this dream analyzed---Doc where are you?
You can calm my worries, and this anxiety subdue
just one hug from you to ease my fright...
and into this mysterious image, shed some light
For now I'll try and clear these cobwebs from my mind
and hopefully in time, logical answers I'll find.
[comments] => 12
[counter] => 245
[topic] => 75
[informant] => hauntedscorp
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[acomm] => 0
[haspoll] => 0
[pollID] => 0
[score] => 29
[ratings] => 7
[editpoem] => 1
[associated] =>
[topicname] => anguished
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Premonition
Contributed by
hauntedscorp
on
Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 10:49:46 AM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Dining with the corpse of my past
the space and time in between seems so vast
The reflection in the mirror is one of worry
these memories coming back in a hazy flurry
An innocent vision meant to disarm
suddenly has me panicked and full of alarm
Can't shake this feeling that something is wrong
this gut-wrenching sensation I feel is so strong
I need this dream analyzed---Doc where are you?
You can calm my worries, and this anxiety subdue
just one hug from you to ease my fright...
and into this mysterious image, shed some light
For now I'll try and clear these cobwebs from my mind
and hopefully in time, logical answers I'll find.
Copyright ©
hauntedscorp
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2005-06-09 10:49:46]
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Re: Premonition
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by Jyssvw on
Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 11:04:03 AM AEST
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| hey scorp, this sounds like it really did freak you out...if this keeps on happening you should try keeping a dream journal..its fun..lol...bye!! |
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Re: Premonition
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by Vampirequeen on
Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 12:17:59 PM AEST
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| wow awsome .hey scorp that is some dream girl. |
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Re: Premonition
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by shelby on
Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 01:44:17 PM AEST
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I relate to this have premoniton dreams often and they always come true not exactly as i dreamt them but so simialr I pay attention to then yes it does friek you out! Heed those dreams my friend they can keep you and your loved ones from harm.
Michelle |
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Re: Premonition
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 03:42:08 PM AEST
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Great opening line, I think I will remember that one for a long time to come.
I seem to be one of the strange people that never dream, or at least never remember them.
Maybe I'm really living in one.
Thanks for sharing yours
Steve |
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Re: Premonition
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by DorianChambers on
Friday, 10th June 2005 @ 09:19:22 PM AEST
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Interesting peice of poetry, stirs the emotions
as well as the very soul it's self, well done
scorp . . .
Ben : ) (((((scorp)))))
aka. Dorian Chamber |
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Re: Premonition
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 04:42:19 PM AEST
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So few poems are about dreams. I've written a few myself. But you'd think that as significant or emotional as we are about them we'd put them in poems more often. Anyway, you got the emotion in there. Good write!
J. |
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Re: Premonition
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by emystar on
Saturday, 18th June 2005 @ 08:49:11 AM AEST
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Great work.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Premonition
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 12:48:09 AM AEST
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| Teriffic Scorpenatoreriffic!!!! Great write!!!! |
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Re: Premonition
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 22nd July 2015 @ 11:57:51 AM AEST
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I've had premonitions before. Can't remember any for quite a few years but they indeed happened before. Get the de ja vu a lot, lately and I sometimes wonder if that's actually a slight memory of a dream this would happen.
And forget the doc! One might say it's just a dream and the next might say you need therapy. Been there done that with them trying to over analyze my *****.
I liked reading this again.
Thankies Scorpendous! |
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Re: Premonition
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 22nd July 2015 @ 11:59:08 AM AEST
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| You always come up with catchy titles. |
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Re: Premonition
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by JamesStockdale on
Tuesday, 13th December 2016 @ 09:19:26 AM AEST
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Thank you for writing about me :)
I can/'/t think of a better way to use my 900/'/th comment.... That should keep you scared.......
Until we meet again........
James |
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Re: Premonition
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by JamesStockdale on
Wednesday, 11th April 2018 @ 03:18:49 AM AEST
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| That is nuts but crazy good...... |
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