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RAVEN
Contributed by
raven-lyn
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Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 11:10:43 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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RAVEN
THE RAVEN CAME FROM OUT OF THE NIGHT
AND STOLE HER LONLY HEART AWAY
INTO THE WORLD THAT THEY COULD BOTH CAN RELAY
UP INTO THE MIDNIGHT SKY HE FLEW
WITH HIS WOMAN BY HIS SIDE TOWARD THE MOON
AND FOREVER MORE THE
RAVEN AND HIS MOONWOMAN
WILL SOAR THE MIDNIGHT SKYS
Copyright ©
raven-lyn
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2005-06-09 11:10:43]
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Re: RAVEN
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by shelby on
Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 02:25:07 PM AEST
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romantic short piece but very romantic
Michelle |
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Re: RAVEN
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by candysears on
Thursday, 29th December 2005 @ 02:25:26 PM AEST
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Really nice..
God Bless! |
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Re: RAVEN
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 29th December 2005 @ 06:20:05 PM AEST
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| I think this was a very good write. You maintained the flow and cadence very well, but most important to me was the subject of the write. Very well done, indeed. |
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