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Array ( [sid] => 97510 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => If I ask [time] => 2005-06-10 00:11:44 [hometext] => I just felt like writting this poem. I was bored and thought of this, if you dont like it thank you for reading. [bodytext] => If I asked if I was pretty,
Would you actually hold me,
And say "you are beautiful" to me?

If I asked can I die,
But actually did,
Would you cry,
Or would you laugh?

If I ask do you even care about me,
Would you be mean,
And just leave me,
Or would you show that you really do care and love me?

If I asked you if you want me to be your wife,
Would you even want me to be in your life,
Or would you hate me and want to stab me with a knife?

If I asked you if you can be mine forever,
Would you break my heart,
Or would you want us to be together?

The guy I love thinks I am beautiful,
And he would hold me saying I am wonderful.
He would cry,
If I ever die.
He'll always care about me,
Because he loves me,
He'll never be mean.
And he would love me to be part of his life,
Something he'll love to be his wife.
He wants me to be forever his,
With heart so sweet of his kiss,
And he always wants us together.
I love you hunny!!!! [comments] => 4 [counter] => 165 [topic] => 2 [informant] => Baby_Grl [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

If I ask

Contributed by Baby_Grl on Friday, 10th June 2005 @ 12:11:44 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

If I asked if I was pretty,
Would you actually hold me,
And say "you are beautiful" to me?

If I asked can I die,
But actually did,
Would you cry,
Or would you laugh?

If I ask do you even care about me,
Would you be mean,
And just leave me,
Or would you show that you really do care and love me?

If I asked you if you want me to be your wife,
Would you even want me to be in your life,
Or would you hate me and want to stab me with a knife?

If I asked you if you can be mine forever,
Would you break my heart,
Or would you want us to be together?

The guy I love thinks I am beautiful,
And he would hold me saying I am wonderful.
He would cry,
If I ever die.
He'll always care about me,
Because he loves me,
He'll never be mean.
And he would love me to be part of his life,
Something he'll love to be his wife.
He wants me to be forever his,
With heart so sweet of his kiss,
And he always wants us together.
I love you hunny!!!!

Copyright © Baby_Grl ... [ 2005-06-10 00:11:44]
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Re: If I ask (User Rating: 1 )
by crystalfire on Friday, 10th June 2005 @ 01:02:47 AM AEST
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Haha, this is such a cute poem...I think it makes any girl smile...I love the repetitive statements (If I ask...) and how you wrapped it up in the end. Wonderful!

Re: If I ask (User Rating: 1 )
by psycopath on Friday, 10th June 2005 @ 01:09:58 PM AEST
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im glad you know how much i love you and all of the end of that poem is true. i love you so much

justin

Re: If I ask (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 10th June 2005 @ 02:57:17 PM AEST
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make me cry. lol

Re: If I ask (User Rating: 1 )
by Giggles1989 on Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 07:24:00 AM AEST
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Hey sis that was great and again u got ur feelings out and that's great! Well I have to talk to you about me and people again. I have a feeling that she/he wants to end it all. I dont know y or how I feel this way, but that's what it has been feeling like. I am worried...Ur poem is something that I should ask Jeremy.

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