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My soul and very being are racked
With Thoughts of you

Not unlike poison on my brain
Hells fire burns in my veins
Consuming my urge to stay clean

The High is so soothing
But not without you there
Is thats all we had
High and a false hope

The question remains which one
of us remains strong
You have become what horrors I dream
I have to watch coz I have control
Today
perhap not tomorrow though

By all thats Holy seek help where you can
And Clean up your act til then
Keep away from Me
You Are pulling me down

Its time again I feel that you should move on.
Ole light house
But I will Forever pray for you each day
Be Safe
Stay safe
Make your way home .

Whisper
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Slipping Back

Contributed by Whisper on Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 11:27:14 AM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes

Pain
My soul and very being are racked
With Thoughts of you

Not unlike poison on my brain
Hells fire burns in my veins
Consuming my urge to stay clean

The High is so soothing
But not without you there
Is thats all we had
High and a false hope

The question remains which one
of us remains strong
You have become what horrors I dream
I have to watch coz I have control
Today
perhap not tomorrow though

By all thats Holy seek help where you can
And Clean up your act til then
Keep away from Me
You Are pulling me down

Its time again I feel that you should move on.
Ole light house
But I will Forever pray for you each day
Be Safe
Stay safe
Make your way home .

Whisper

Copyright © Whisper ... [ 2005-06-12 11:27:14]
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Re: Slipping Back (User Rating: 1 )
by MorningDove on Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 12:14:06 PM AEST
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So sad. Please stay strong and do what is best for you. I know it is hard to kick.

Rita

Re: Slipping Back (User Rating: 1 )
by Elfie on Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 11:11:38 AM AEST
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Reminds me of something that happened to me.

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