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Deep into a mist,
Far into the distance.
Hazy eyes hang
Heavily on the face of an angel.

Such a peaceful nights sky.
And the water, so calm.
With the stars reflecting all their glory
And all their beauty.

The moon, so bright.
It shines with pride.
Guiding us through
With a voice that no one knew.

Mountains holding up the clearness of the sky.
Ones so high, they could steal the breath from your lungs.

The angel awaits you to come.
She stands there with cold wings.
And you never showed up.
But she shines and smiles,

Rises and disappears into the night.
She'll be back again.
And you'll see her,
But only through the clearing.

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The Clearing

Contributed by IceQueenElle13 on Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 12:33:38 PM in AEST
Topic: NaturePoetry

The Clearing-Elle. Yates

Deep into a mist,
Far into the distance.
Hazy eyes hang
Heavily on the face of an angel.

Such a peaceful nights sky.
And the water, so calm.
With the stars reflecting all their glory
And all their beauty.

The moon, so bright.
It shines with pride.
Guiding us through
With a voice that no one knew.

Mountains holding up the clearness of the sky.
Ones so high, they could steal the breath from your lungs.

The angel awaits you to come.
She stands there with cold wings.
And you never showed up.
But she shines and smiles,

Rises and disappears into the night.
She'll be back again.
And you'll see her,
But only through the clearing.

Copyright ©2005

Copyright Â© IceQueenElle13 ... [ 2005-06-12 12:33:38]
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Re: The Clearing (User Rating: 1 )
by Blu on Wednesday, 22nd June 2005 @ 02:20:43 PM AEST
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Beautiful imagery!
Angels are such a diverse metaphor... love it.

Very nice write.

Blu

Re: The Clearing (User Rating: 1 )
by AmyLee4Ever on Thursday, 19th January 2006 @ 10:54:02 PM AEST
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I agree... you imagery is amazing. That is something that will make any poem great. Then... you have your personification going in here... which creates deep writes. I love it... keep it up...

Jodi

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