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I watch you as you softly weep, beside my silent grave
I see the poems you put there,they are all addressed to me
I hope you finally realise, my soul has been set free

I watch you as you toss and turn,when you both try to sleep
And as you do I hear the angels sigh and softly weep
They sing their song to tell you,to try to make you see
I am no longer lonely, they are looking after me

Please my darlings, don't be sad, for I am now at peace
From all my pain and troubles,I have found such sweet release
And though I know the both of you feel we are far apart
I'm sure I'll live for ever buried deep within your heart

I am here all around you,I'm with you everywhere
I'll send a soft white feather, just to show I'm there
So now my two dear loved ones,please try to understand
I'm very safe and happy,I've been touched by God's right hand
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Touched By God's Right Hand

Contributed by gwenevere on Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 01:33:26 PM in AEST
Topic: Grief

My mother and my lover,I need you to be brave
I watch you as you softly weep, beside my silent grave
I see the poems you put there,they are all addressed to me
I hope you finally realise, my soul has been set free

I watch you as you toss and turn,when you both try to sleep
And as you do I hear the angels sigh and softly weep
They sing their song to tell you,to try to make you see
I am no longer lonely, they are looking after me

Please my darlings, don't be sad, for I am now at peace
From all my pain and troubles,I have found such sweet release
And though I know the both of you feel we are far apart
I'm sure I'll live for ever buried deep within your heart

I am here all around you,I'm with you everywhere
I'll send a soft white feather, just to show I'm there
So now my two dear loved ones,please try to understand
I'm very safe and happy,I've been touched by God's right hand

Copyright © gwenevere ... [ 2005-06-12 13:33:26]
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Re: Touched By God's Right Hand (User Rating: 1 )
by jyssvw22 on Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 02:15:59 PM AEST
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WOW

well done
well done

Re: Touched By God's Right Hand (User Rating: 1 )
by Man_On_High on Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 11:17:01 PM AEST
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An amazing write..
You're flow and finesse are flawless.
Such beautiful saddness..

5 stars from me

B

Re: Touched By God's Right Hand (User Rating: 1 )
by europeanprincess on Sunday, 9th July 2006 @ 08:32:42 AM AEST
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i feel like crying. this was well written. thank you for sharing.

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