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Array ( [sid] => 97766 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Her Foray [time] => 2005-06-12 14:18:10 [hometext] => 05-03-2005 [bodytext] => Alone your awareness perceives the beauty of the day
Reflecting from your vibrant presence in our play
From suitor to suitor you aimlessly stray
Face first into each man's contextual foray
I watch as your desireable facets decay
Just as the predictable tools jump into the fray
You become overwhelmed by all of the truths I say
The only way for you to escape is to walk forever away
But I have moods which will subside if you stay
Contrasting yourself from everything by your gleaming ray
Sunshine's love glistens within whichever layman is gray
The message these words seek to so deftly portray
You are the motivation for this life I want to slay. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 437 [topic] => 48 [informant] => EntrancedDrifter [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Her Foray

Contributed by EntrancedDrifter on Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 02:18:10 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Alone your awareness perceives the beauty of the day
Reflecting from your vibrant presence in our play
From suitor to suitor you aimlessly stray
Face first into each man's contextual foray
I watch as your desireable facets decay
Just as the predictable tools jump into the fray
You become overwhelmed by all of the truths I say
The only way for you to escape is to walk forever away
But I have moods which will subside if you stay
Contrasting yourself from everything by your gleaming ray
Sunshine's love glistens within whichever layman is gray
The message these words seek to so deftly portray
You are the motivation for this life I want to slay.

Copyright © EntrancedDrifter ... [ 2005-06-12 14:18:10]
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Re: Her Foray (User Rating: 1 )
by pUnKa_RaCh on Monday, 13th June 2005 @ 04:47:22 AM AEST
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great rhyming style..this was an absolute pleasure to read. lovely word imagery used

well done to you!

Re: Her Foray (User Rating: 1 )
by the_pied_piper on Sunday, 8th January 2006 @ 12:59:59 PM AEST
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that was brilliant.... i felt sum ting dere a connection or sumting

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