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There was once a graying statue

Frozen in light bound for ever

Destined to always be alone

It was a shell of what once was

Full of life glowing with a golden light

That shown through the night

It once lit up the world like stars

In the moment of their birth

But it felt no love and had no one

It did not know what it wanted

It did not have what it needed

So that light slowly dimmed and died

When it did no one cried

Not a single tear

And he was forgotten

left in a museum to watch the world

Till one day you came by

It saw how beautiful you were

It found you to be so easy to love

But it could not tell you so it wept

You saw those tears and felt the hurt

And like an angel you where there

With closed eyes and lips set to kiss

You kissed the statue on its cheek

And the shell started cracking

And a golden light shown through

Like a dieing sun it exploded

And from that chaos wings came through

Like a phoenix with flames of purple shades

I was reborn

Only to be loved by you
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Rebirth in a kiss

Contributed by Doriens_Picture on Monday, 13th June 2005 @ 11:50:59 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry





There was once a graying statue

Frozen in light bound for ever

Destined to always be alone

It was a shell of what once was

Full of life glowing with a golden light

That shown through the night

It once lit up the world like stars

In the moment of their birth

But it felt no love and had no one

It did not know what it wanted

It did not have what it needed

So that light slowly dimmed and died

When it did no one cried

Not a single tear

And he was forgotten

left in a museum to watch the world

Till one day you came by

It saw how beautiful you were

It found you to be so easy to love

But it could not tell you so it wept

You saw those tears and felt the hurt

And like an angel you where there

With closed eyes and lips set to kiss

You kissed the statue on its cheek

And the shell started cracking

And a golden light shown through

Like a dieing sun it exploded

And from that chaos wings came through

Like a phoenix with flames of purple shades

I was reborn

Only to be loved by you




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Re: Rebirth in a kiss (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 14th June 2005 @ 12:06:05 AM AEST
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wow!
A masterpeice of beauty.
u go now, my friend!
huggs, smiles,
emy


Re: Rebirth in a kiss (User Rating: 1 )
by heartless_soul on Tuesday, 14th June 2005 @ 12:15:11 AM AEST
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Yes this was truly romatic I only wish I could feel that kind of love, this was a well writen poem and is worth of publication, bravo. read you later. be well

*H_S*


Re: Rebirth in a kiss (User Rating: 1 )
by Gothchyk on Tuesday, 14th June 2005 @ 02:25:11 AM AEST
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always let your light shine, for w/o it i would be lost in the clouds, muaw.


Re: Rebirth in a kiss (User Rating: 1 )
by pUnKa_RaCh on Tuesday, 14th June 2005 @ 07:16:13 AM AEST
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i agree with emy, absolute masterpiece!!!

*claps* lovely words john, just amazing




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