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feather caress her soft skin riddled with scars
but a single tear rolled down her cheek
standing on the edge of a knife
she watches all the smiling faces
and rolling landscapes
stepping, she leaves the ground
her wings catch the air
as she falls
for a moment she expirences the thrill
as her body dances on the air
but her feathers fade
one by one
memory by memory
the wind carries them away
until there is nuthing
but shattered dreams
and broken promises
nuthing left but tears
and shadows
and saddened eyes
falling
taking one last look
she sees watis left of her body
broken, lying on the cold tile floor
stained with blood
razor lying beside her
nothing left
but tears and blood [comments] => 4 [counter] => 238 [topic] => 74 [informant] => razorbladesangel45 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => surreal )

tears and blood

Contributed by razorbladesangel45 on Tuesday, 14th June 2005 @ 11:23:08 PM in AEST
Topic: surreal

dark wings out behind her
feather caress her soft skin riddled with scars
but a single tear rolled down her cheek
standing on the edge of a knife
she watches all the smiling faces
and rolling landscapes
stepping, she leaves the ground
her wings catch the air
as she falls
for a moment she expirences the thrill
as her body dances on the air
but her feathers fade
one by one
memory by memory
the wind carries them away
until there is nuthing
but shattered dreams
and broken promises
nuthing left but tears
and shadows
and saddened eyes
falling
taking one last look
she sees watis left of her body
broken, lying on the cold tile floor
stained with blood
razor lying beside her
nothing left
but tears and blood

Copyright © razorbladesangel45 ... [ 2005-06-14 23:23:08]
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Re: tears and blood (User Rating: 1 )
by chaos_01 on Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 01:05:41 AM AEST
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OMG thats a really awesome poem keeping posting more i would love to read more.

Re: tears and blood (User Rating: 1 )
by carebear_06 on Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 04:11:52 AM AEST
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this is a great poem. i had an image in my head the whole time i read it. nice job

Re: tears and blood (User Rating: 1 )
by unluckicharmz on Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 08:41:22 AM AEST
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dang angel you write so good and im glad your letting people read them they are good we all know it keep it up and keep adding more! tell drake to give you back your poem book!

Re: tears and blood (User Rating: 1 )
by Urizen on Saturday, 30th July 2005 @ 05:59:00 AM AEST
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Good poem, very dark but all the better for it I feel. It all becomes clear at the end, a god write, thank you for sharing.

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