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I love her so much
But my heart is weak
I need you Lord
To come take my grief

Lord come take my grief
And release my mind
Relinquish my soul
From all of my pride

My heart is hurt
And I have so much pain
every time I hear her name
My heart goes insane

I hear your sweet voice
And it whispers my name
Fir in my life
Your voice will remain

You’ve touched my life
But you filled it with shame
You’ve ripped out my heart
And left me in pain

I remember your eyes
And the love that they shared
For in our hearts
Are love was so fare

But when did it go
And when did it fall
your love for me
That was lost to it all

For I’d give it all
For one more chance
To have your sweet kiss
and that loving glance

Forever in my heart
Will are love remain
But my heart will bleed red
With all of my pain

~Steve~ [comments] => 7 [counter] => 215 [topic] => 22 [informant] => sride686 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 18 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Love That Hurts

Contributed by sride686 on Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 06:27:30 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

I love her so much
But my heart is weak
I need you Lord
To come take my grief

Lord come take my grief
And release my mind
Relinquish my soul
From all of my pride

My heart is hurt
And I have so much pain
every time I hear her name
My heart goes insane

I hear your sweet voice
And it whispers my name
Fir in my life
Your voice will remain

You’ve touched my life
But you filled it with shame
You’ve ripped out my heart
And left me in pain

I remember your eyes
And the love that they shared
For in our hearts
Are love was so fare

But when did it go
And when did it fall
your love for me
That was lost to it all

For I’d give it all
For one more chance
To have your sweet kiss
and that loving glance

Forever in my heart
Will are love remain
But my heart will bleed red
With all of my pain

~Steve~

Copyright Â© sride686 ... [ 2005-06-15 06:27:30]
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Re: Love That Hurts (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 06:38:14 AM AEST
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very sad but awesomely written.
huggs,
emy

Re: Love That Hurts (User Rating: 1 )
by Sinned on Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 08:05:52 AM AEST
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sride686

Sad,but awsome beautiful poem.
I share your feelings.

Sinned

Re: Love That Hurts (User Rating: 1 )
by MissEm on Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 08:26:22 AM AEST
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Beautifully painful - totally relatable.
Proof that words are strong medicine.
Thank you

Re: Love That Hurts (User Rating: 1 )
by suicidal_imbecile on Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 11:15:32 AM AEST
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Steve... why does your poetry make my heart ache? Have you tried to contact her? Does she know how much she has destroyed you? This poem... it flowed so well, from beginning to end, it was like a red rose slowly wilting from the heat. take care buddy
kate

Re: Love That Hurts (User Rating: 1 )
by In_a_while on Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 11:33:12 AM AEST
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Very good piece of poetry!! the emotions that flowed through it all were smooth and heartfelt. I hear the pain and feel for ya... take care and keep up the good writes. dw

Re: Love That Hurts (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 11:41:50 AM AEST
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Wow my friend that is very deep .
I hope she realize what is hurting so much.
take care
great write

huggies

Re: Love That Hurts (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 12:07:23 PM AEST
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great write very emotinal
will you send ur address to me again please it got deleted on accident
thanksssss
Michelle

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