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on a swing sometimes together
the sun setting the sky on fire
i think it's time to get her

sometimes, she's fury and fire
raging through words and trees
but then she can be like the rain
soothing like morning light's breeze

occasionally, she laughs till it hurts
and her stomach is pain deep inside
her blue rain turns to tears
now she's a black dressing bride

once in a while, we talk for no time
for no wind can blow for too long
i wait for pain's cloud to build
so she can fuel my fiery dawn...

occasionally...codependency's my worst enemy..

dw

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Black Dressing Bride

Contributed by In_a_While on Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 09:05:09 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

well, back and forth we go
on a swing sometimes together
the sun setting the sky on fire
i think it's time to get her

sometimes, she's fury and fire
raging through words and trees
but then she can be like the rain
soothing like morning light's breeze

occasionally, she laughs till it hurts
and her stomach is pain deep inside
her blue rain turns to tears
now she's a black dressing bride

once in a while, we talk for no time
for no wind can blow for too long
i wait for pain's cloud to build
so she can fuel my fiery dawn...

occasionally...codependency's my worst enemy..

dw

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Re: Black Dressing Bride (User Rating: 1 )
by FigurelessShadow on Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 09:10:16 AM AEST
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Nice, its good. dark and romantic...
Well done
FigurelessShadow

Re: Black Dressing Bride (User Rating: 1 )
by MorningGlory on Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 09:41:54 AM AEST
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I love the words you used to describe things in this poem...Beautifully written.

Re: Black Dressing Bride (User Rating: 1 )
by sride686 on Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 04:33:09 AM AEST
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Well DW a very good write and like always very deep. You did use awesome words and it made in very romantic and dark at the same time. I haven’t read one like it very original keep up the good writes with your own style. I look forward to more take care…Steve

Re: Black Dressing Bride (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 06:26:27 PM AEST
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Great job Dwayne...Excellent, descriptive write. I'm impressed.
Scorp.

Re: Black Dressing Bride (User Rating: 1 )
by Man_On_High on Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 09:23:21 PM AEST
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Bittersweet emotion..
I love the line:

"raging through words and trees"

awesome

B

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