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Array ( [sid] => 98125 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Promise Me [time] => 2005-06-15 10:36:38 [hometext] => When you see the end of a road in the distance, you try to grasp what is quickly fleeting. [bodytext] => Promise me that in the end
I'll have the strength to laugh again
And walk outside to let the rain
Gently wash away my pain
To dance barefoot, toes in sand
Rock out to my favorite band

Promise me the sun will shine
My heart will soon again be mine
On secrets sweet I will dwell less
(But those most dear I'll still possess)

Above all else, please promise this --
That someday someone new will kiss
As sweetly, as lovingly as you do
Please promise me, please be true [comments] => 9 [counter] => 206 [topic] => 52 [informant] => MissEm [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => goodbyepoetry )

Promise Me

Contributed by MissEm on Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 10:36:38 AM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry

Promise me that in the end
I'll have the strength to laugh again
And walk outside to let the rain
Gently wash away my pain
To dance barefoot, toes in sand
Rock out to my favorite band

Promise me the sun will shine
My heart will soon again be mine
On secrets sweet I will dwell less
(But those most dear I'll still possess)

Above all else, please promise this --
That someday someone new will kiss
As sweetly, as lovingly as you do
Please promise me, please be true

Copyright © MissEm ... [ 2005-06-15 10:36:38]
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Re: Promise Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Arden on Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 10:52:22 AM AEST
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*Sighs*
yet again, lovely work.
5/5
-Arden

Re: Promise Me (User Rating: 1 )
by unluckicharmz on Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 10:58:36 AM AEST
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Re: Promise Me (User Rating: 1 )
by expired_promises on Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 11:19:28 AM AEST
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i love this poem, it captures perfectly the way a person feels after someone special has left their life.

Re: Promise Me (User Rating: 1 )
by In_a_while on Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 02:18:49 PM AEST
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Very tenderly put together!! I liked it a lot and thank you so much for sharing it! dw

Re: Promise Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Justintears on Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 06:28:21 PM AEST
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My heart smiles every time i read it !!! thankyou... ~ justintears

Re: Promise Me (User Rating: 1 )
by MorningGlory on Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 09:06:10 PM AEST
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Very touching...Beautifully written and so heart warming. I love it.

Amy

Re: Promise Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Man_On_High on Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 09:29:03 PM AEST
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a true heartfelt write of hopes and dreams..
your longing is very evident

great write

B

Re: Promise Me (User Rating: 1 )
by justmeallicanbe on Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 01:59:44 PM AEST
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This is beautiful. I think we are on the same wavelength today. Brought tears to my eyes. Wonderful. Heidi~

Re: Promise Me (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Wednesday, 25th April 2007 @ 07:37:43 PM AEST
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this is truly beautiful, my best to you always,

love n' hugs nessa

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