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You keep on going
Contributed by
northernrick
on
Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 05:58:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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She says everything is ok
But all she does is look away
She tells you she loves you,
yet she doesnt say good bye
You thought you were happy
Thats a lie
But u know you love her
All this pain hurts inside...
What should you do
you are stuck
She says she loves you
but it doesnt show
you dont say anything
the pain continues to grow
You want to stay with her forever
she says she does to
but u know what she says
is not true
You love it when she looks you in the eye
the amount of love you have for her
Spreads across the sky
the amount she has for you
makes you want to cry
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northernrick
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2005-06-16 17:58:21]
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Re: You keep on going
(User Rating: 1 )
by xXcrossedXx on
Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 08:29:35 AM AEST
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Oh! This was beautiful I had to try so hard not to cry.
I'm basically speechless right now cause I'm trying not to, this was beautiful. Amazing write, please keep it up! I'll be coming back to look at more of your writing.
Excellent!
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