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what you did after it ended
Contributed by
northernrick
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Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 06:11:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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You take the knife across your wrist
You know it hurts, yet you give it a twist
You call her up before it all ends
You tell her what shes done
You look at your gun
You tell her the love you had for her
You tell her how much you cared
You put the phone down, and take the gun
You hear her scream and begin to run
You put the barrel up to your head
She was right with what she said
.........Its All Over.......
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Re: what you did after it ended
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by xXcrossedXx on
Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 08:35:19 AM AEST
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Oh my- this is outstanding! You really do write with your heart, its beautiful. You have talent. Please keep writing!
xoxo
--amanda-- |
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