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Array ( [sid] => 98301 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My Sad Realisation [time] => 2005-06-16 21:04:52 [hometext] => This one might be a bit obscure but the basic message is not all things are as they appear....comment [bodytext] => Soft music is composed
As the gifted in voice do sing
Whereas if notes do not exist
If melodies are not played
Music does not spread its wing

The sun never fails to rise
In the early morning hour
The beginning of each day
Still light is overshadowed
By darkness arriving to devour

A rose does blossom
Taking a most beauteous form
Yet it soon does tire and die
The shades do fade
Wilting in night’s storm

An actor does wear a mask
Whilst inhabiting a role
Then when the curtain falls
The mask is unveiled
Revealing his desperate soul

Just as it is written
-~________~-
“Even in laughter the heart may be in pain…”
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My Sad Realisation

Contributed by pUnKa_RaCh on Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 09:04:52 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

Soft music is composed
As the gifted in voice do sing
Whereas if notes do not exist
If melodies are not played
Music does not spread its wing

The sun never fails to rise
In the early morning hour
The beginning of each day
Still light is overshadowed
By darkness arriving to devour

A rose does blossom
Taking a most beauteous form
Yet it soon does tire and die
The shades do fade
Wilting in night’s storm

An actor does wear a mask
Whilst inhabiting a role
Then when the curtain falls
The mask is unveiled
Revealing his desperate soul

Just as it is written
-~________~-
“Even in laughter the heart may be in pain…”

Copyright Â© pUnKa_RaCh ... [ 2005-06-16 21:04:52]
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Re: My Sad Realisation (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 09:17:42 PM AEST
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An awesome write.
huggs,
emy

Re: My Sad Realisation (User Rating: 1 )
by Sherah on Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 09:34:15 PM AEST
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Nice Poem!! Keep up the Good work

Re: My Sad Realisation (User Rating: 1 )
by MorningDove on Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 01:34:04 PM AEST
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This is so real to life. Splendid write. Very few things are exactly as they seem, so we should never take things at face value. We should investigate more before we jump in or accept as the truth. Splendid, splendid.

Rita

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