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Breaking it Down
Contributed by
AnastasiaN
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Saturday, 18th June 2005 @ 03:43:58 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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to be your one and only
i am failing
to be something remembered
i am nothing
to be anything at all
i am struggling
but to be myself
I am lacking
to stay afloat
i am sinking
and to be strong
i am weakening
to be loved
i am circling
cuz this pattern you've sewn is killing me
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AnastasiaN
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2005-06-18 03:43:58]
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Re: Breaking it Down
(User Rating: 1 )
by disposible_teen on
Saturday, 18th June 2005 @ 04:22:36 AM AEST
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| I liked it...had good emotion in it...keep it up |
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Re: Breaking it Down
(User Rating: 1 )
by starry_eyed_soul on
Saturday, 18th June 2005 @ 10:41:11 AM AEST
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really good... i liked how it flowed.... well keep it up
.:*TiffanyShay |
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