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Array ( [sid] => 9848 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Thank You [time] => 2003-01-06 06:20:00 [hometext] => This is the truth behind my other poems..this is the truth of my family...this is my life.... [bodytext] => Thank you Dad,
for never being there
when I needed u the most
You just sat there to stare
Like everything was gonna be ok
Everything was alright
Didn't u hear the hatred?
Didnt u hear the fights?

Thank you Mom,
for atleast pretending u cared
for trying to make me talk
for all the fake laughs we shared
You shouldnt have gotten back with dad
shouldve stayed away from him
Didn't u see he lied?
He made our family's lifes dim

Thank you Bro,
for all the hurt and pain
all the bruises and cuts
for throwing me out in the rain
I cried tears of blood from you
yet u didn't acknowledge the abuse
Don't u know strangling me by the neck
is just as bad as when u tried a noose?

So by the time u all read this
You will know why I chose this fate
I couldn't live without the help I needed
My life was filled with nothing but hate
So let me try to explain
I just needed to get away from u all..
It's not that I didnt this to cause all u pain
I needed somewhere else to go
no fighting or someone going scream
This way is best I tell you
Atleast it is for me.... [comments] => 2 [counter] => 213 [topic] => 36 [informant] => PsychoticDreamz [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )
Thank You

Contributed by PsychoticDreamz on Monday, 6th January 2003 @ 06:20:00 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



Thank you Dad,
for never being there
when I needed u the most
You just sat there to stare
Like everything was gonna be ok
Everything was alright
Didn't u hear the hatred?
Didnt u hear the fights?

Thank you Mom,
for atleast pretending u cared
for trying to make me talk
for all the fake laughs we shared
You shouldnt have gotten back with dad
shouldve stayed away from him
Didn't u see he lied?
He made our family's lifes dim

Thank you Bro,
for all the hurt and pain
all the bruises and cuts
for throwing me out in the rain
I cried tears of blood from you
yet u didn't acknowledge the abuse
Don't u know strangling me by the neck
is just as bad as when u tried a noose?

So by the time u all read this
You will know why I chose this fate
I couldn't live without the help I needed
My life was filled with nothing but hate
So let me try to explain
I just needed to get away from u all..
It's not that I didnt this to cause all u pain
I needed somewhere else to go
no fighting or someone going scream
This way is best I tell you
Atleast it is for me....




Copyright © PsychoticDreamz ... [ 2003-01-06 06:20:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Thank You (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Monday, 6th January 2003 @ 02:50:53 PM AEST
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This is so sad the pain you write about is hard for me to imagine. I could say I understand, but that would be a lie the pain I wrote about is not about my family. One thing that is good even though they are annoying is my family. This is a really good poem you have great talent. Hang in there and keep yer chin up.

Bobo (Joel)


Re: Thank You (User Rating: 1 )
by Jade on Tuesday, 7th January 2003 @ 12:14:44 AM AEST
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I can totally relate to this poem. I have felt pain like this. I have also thought the same thoughts. I always just had to remember that it would only make their lives easier if I did that.




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