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Array ( [sid] => 98493 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Farewell Until Next Dawn [time] => 2005-06-18 15:39:14 [hometext] => I created this poem because I know that everywhere everyone goes, there will always be someone or something raining on your parade. [bodytext] => Dancing in the sunshine fields of flowers,
Feeling on top of the world with inhuman powers.
Until that cloud up above came along the path,
Evil swept down, taking the child in its wrath.

The rain poured over the flowers of all kinds,
Leaving that small girls heart in many binds.
Leerings from the storm swooped down on her that day,
The field that once blossomed is now here she will forever lay.

Shrieks from within her dying soul,
Took her heart--that one huge toll.
The pigtail, blue-eyed child is now gone,
Farewell beautiful flowers, until next dawn. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 439 [topic] => 13 [informant] => HoPeFuLtKn [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Farewell Until Next Dawn

Contributed by HoPeFuLtKn on Saturday, 18th June 2005 @ 03:39:14 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Dancing in the sunshine fields of flowers,
Feeling on top of the world with inhuman powers.
Until that cloud up above came along the path,
Evil swept down, taking the child in its wrath.

The rain poured over the flowers of all kinds,
Leaving that small girls heart in many binds.
Leerings from the storm swooped down on her that day,
The field that once blossomed is now here she will forever lay.

Shrieks from within her dying soul,
Took her heart--that one huge toll.
The pigtail, blue-eyed child is now gone,
Farewell beautiful flowers, until next dawn.

Copyright © HoPeFuLtKn ... [ 2005-06-18 15:39:14]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Farewell Until Next Dawn (User Rating: 1 )
by ForeverAlone on Saturday, 18th June 2005 @ 04:08:10 PM AEST
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Awesome, such a beautiful piece. As always

~Clark

Re: Farewell Until Next Dawn (User Rating: 1 )
by Dorkfish on Tuesday, 21st June 2005 @ 11:48:11 AM AEST
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Another great one...you're right at some point there is always someone raining on your parade. Good write.

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