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Array ( [sid] => 98527 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Haunting [time] => 2005-06-18 20:42:38 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I awake, finding myself in an unkept and dishelved bed.
I wake only unable to remember where I am.
I hate living like this.
I went days without sleep, barely any food....
this was driving me insane.
But didn't he cause this?
Didn't he somehow drive me to the edge
only to pull me back in time and call himself a hero?
I can't take it anymore.
Send someone for me, I know you want me to come home.
But as I make my way back I think of what'll you'll say.
I picture you sitting in a black leather chair
You won't even turn your head to look at me when you say

That I only came back because I wanted to and that only madness awaits for me out there
I know that's not true.
I know that you can't live with the fact of not having a companion with you for eternity.
I know you summoned me here, tortured me until I could bare it no longer and come back to you.

It's the same old dance every time.
You say that you would do anything for me,
but when I ask for something I truely desire
you will turn to me, with your violet eyes
and say that you'd rather die then do the simply task I ask of you.

I finally crack.
I fall down upon my knees before you and plead for this tantilizing gift.
Tears begin to stream down my face
You embrace me in your cold dead arms
which are filled with such passion.
Your close enough to kiss or kill me
but you admit that you love me too much to end my life.
and with that you finally give into my plea.

My eyes fill up with tears as I draw strenght from you.
I quickly feel the pain sweep over me
but it slowly dissapears
and is replace with nerve-searing passion
and all the while you smile sadly and you start to cry
Please don't cry I say as I wipe your tears away.
I heard a hint of sadness in your velvet laugh
as you whispered seductivly into my ear
" I guess we will be in hell together after all."
I wouldn't have it any other way.

What better way to spend eternity then within your embrace.

My eyes begin to blur
my racing heart slows down
everything around us becomes bright and radient
I feel your head upon my chest
as I stare up at the ceiling blindfully.

I close my eyes
and drift off...
dreaming about our haunting love.
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Haunting

Contributed by night_goddess666 on Saturday, 18th June 2005 @ 08:42:38 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



I awake, finding myself in an unkept and dishelved bed.
I wake only unable to remember where I am.
I hate living like this.
I went days without sleep, barely any food....
this was driving me insane.
But didn't he cause this?
Didn't he somehow drive me to the edge
only to pull me back in time and call himself a hero?
I can't take it anymore.
Send someone for me, I know you want me to come home.
But as I make my way back I think of what'll you'll say.
I picture you sitting in a black leather chair
You won't even turn your head to look at me when you say

That I only came back because I wanted to and that only madness awaits for me out there
I know that's not true.
I know that you can't live with the fact of not having a companion with you for eternity.
I know you summoned me here, tortured me until I could bare it no longer and come back to you.

It's the same old dance every time.
You say that you would do anything for me,
but when I ask for something I truely desire
you will turn to me, with your violet eyes
and say that you'd rather die then do the simply task I ask of you.

I finally crack.
I fall down upon my knees before you and plead for this tantilizing gift.
Tears begin to stream down my face
You embrace me in your cold dead arms
which are filled with such passion.
Your close enough to kiss or kill me
but you admit that you love me too much to end my life.
and with that you finally give into my plea.

My eyes fill up with tears as I draw strenght from you.
I quickly feel the pain sweep over me
but it slowly dissapears
and is replace with nerve-searing passion
and all the while you smile sadly and you start to cry
Please don't cry I say as I wipe your tears away.
I heard a hint of sadness in your velvet laugh
as you whispered seductivly into my ear
" I guess we will be in hell together after all."
I wouldn't have it any other way.

What better way to spend eternity then within your embrace.

My eyes begin to blur
my racing heart slows down
everything around us becomes bright and radient
I feel your head upon my chest
as I stare up at the ceiling blindfully.

I close my eyes
and drift off...
dreaming about our haunting love.




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Re: Haunting (User Rating: 1 )
by PoisonousPyscho on Sunday, 19th June 2005 @ 11:19:08 AM AEST
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A true masterpiece.... to be able to tell such a story with so few words ..and be able to put such a vivid picture into the readers's mind it is truly amazing..i am awestruck beyond belief


Re: Haunting (User Rating: 1 )
by Cancer on Friday, 11th November 2005 @ 07:54:50 PM AEST
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quite nice. i've read a few others of yours, but i liked this one best because you didn't worry with rhyming. quiet madness and tainted love. delightful.

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