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that life is no loger even worth living, that your soul will never be mend

what can you do when every single night, you cry yourself to sleep?

and whenever you finnaly do manage to drift off, you prey that you never wake?

what do you do when you discover, that everythin you know is a lie???

what can you do when your greatest wish is that youll just finnaly die.

what can you do when youve lost all your hope, and your sanity is nowhere to be found??

can you slash your writs, or tie a noose???
well make sure you go deep!! make sure its not loose!!!
now whats that you say????
you cant find the strength???

so instead of just ending it
you force youself to live!
you must deserve this pain
so more pain you will give

you inflict it in on yourself now
so whos realy to blame???
now youre even more confused
it like life is a game

and you can never win
but you can never quit
so you go through life
always feelin like ****

so tell me now, what can you realy do,
when the person you hate the most is realy you???

Copyright ©2005 Amanda Hope Indelicato [comments] => 3 [counter] => 183 [topic] => 48 [informant] => bethers_is_my_baby [notes] => Edited due to the use of a banned word. - moderator_16 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

what can you do?

Contributed by bethers_is_my_baby on Saturday, 18th June 2005 @ 08:55:58 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

what can you do when all you keep thinkin is you wish it would all just end?

that life is no loger even worth living, that your soul will never be mend

what can you do when every single night, you cry yourself to sleep?

and whenever you finnaly do manage to drift off, you prey that you never wake?

what do you do when you discover, that everythin you know is a lie???

what can you do when your greatest wish is that youll just finnaly die.

what can you do when youve lost all your hope, and your sanity is nowhere to be found??

can you slash your writs, or tie a noose???
well make sure you go deep!! make sure its not loose!!!
now whats that you say????
you cant find the strength???

so instead of just ending it
you force youself to live!
you must deserve this pain
so more pain you will give

you inflict it in on yourself now
so whos realy to blame???
now youre even more confused
it like life is a game

and you can never win
but you can never quit
so you go through life
always feelin like ****

so tell me now, what can you realy do,
when the person you hate the most is realy you???

Copyright ©2005 Amanda Hope Indelicato

Copyright Â© bethers_is_my_baby ... [ 2005-06-18 20:55:58]
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Re: what can you do? (User Rating: 1 )
by sprinter27 on Saturday, 18th June 2005 @ 09:11:48 PM AEST
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great write! it really sounding like you were talking about me! you know what i do?? tell myself that i'm stronger than suicide, that i can beat it. people who give in were too weak. People that stop themselves from doing it are stronger than the people that give in. we have to fight it... no matter how hard. we, the strong people, have to be strong for this poor, helpless world we live in today. i hope everything goes ok for you!!!

~sprints

p.s. keep up the good work!

Re: what can you do? (User Rating: 1 )
by twisted_dreams on Saturday, 18th June 2005 @ 10:07:45 PM AEST
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wow.. taht is really good. and i can relate to that alot! it is packed with emotion and written realy well! great job

Re: what can you do? (User Rating: 1 )
by sride686 on Sunday, 19th June 2005 @ 01:09:21 PM AEST
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Wow can you say good…Damn. This write really mad me think and the ending blew me away. My life is like this sometimes and I to wonder if I hate the world or just hate myself. I used to love God but I lost my faith and maybe I only lost faith in myself. Take care and write me if you need to talk I’m always here. I have to much time to think over here in Iraq and it plays games with my mind. Keep your head up always your friend….Steve

so tell me now, what can you realy do,
when the person you hate the most is realy you???

This is all to true in life and I'm sorry you feel this but know I understand what you mean.

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