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Array ( [sid] => 98584 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The forsaken Mermaid [time] => 2005-06-19 10:33:47 [hometext] => This poem narrates the plight of the lady-love who has lost her lover and who speaks with a character not in original human form. [bodytext] => Come dear Merman, let us away
Down and below, this way, this way
Call him once before you go
In a voice that he will know
For my voices, wild with pain,
Surely he should come again
Call him once and come away
Down and below, this way, this way

Dear Merman, “were we long alone”,
The sea grows stormy and there we moan
Long prayers, “I said,” in the world they say
Come, “ I said and we rose through the surf in the bay
He sate by the pillar; we saw him clear;
Dear lover! Come quick, we are here!
Dear heart, “I said, “ we are long alone;
The sea grows stormy and there we moan
At the white sleeping town
And then came back down
Saying: “Here dwells a loved one, how cruel is he,
Who has left lonely forever, the queen of the sea”!
[comments] => 1 [counter] => 199 [topic] => 22 [informant] => girish [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

The forsaken Mermaid

Contributed by girish on Sunday, 19th June 2005 @ 10:33:47 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Come dear Merman, let us away
Down and below, this way, this way
Call him once before you go
In a voice that he will know
For my voices, wild with pain,
Surely he should come again
Call him once and come away
Down and below, this way, this way

Dear Merman, “were we long alone”,
The sea grows stormy and there we moan
Long prayers, “I said,” in the world they say
Come, “ I said and we rose through the surf in the bay
He sate by the pillar; we saw him clear;
Dear lover! Come quick, we are here!
Dear heart, “I said, “ we are long alone;
The sea grows stormy and there we moan
At the white sleeping town
And then came back down
Saying: “Here dwells a loved one, how cruel is he,
Who has left lonely forever, the queen of the sea”!

Copyright Â© girish ... [ 2005-06-19 10:33:47]
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Re: The forsaken Mermaid (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 4th July 2005 @ 09:52:56 PM AEST
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very clever:) hugs n' love nessa

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