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even when darker than blue
hand me the handgun, i can't understand fun
i broke all the candles in you...

a state of decay, comes often to play
when my skin begins to unravel
or rather it crawls, up ladders and walls
when does it ever not travel...?

i wish she would leave, so i could now grieve
then pass into madness above
instead i'm on earth, left burnt at my birth
nothing prepares me for love...

she's all the flames, that flicker mind games
i'm burnt at every which turn
yes i'm in love, it's what i'm afraid of
never will hate let me learn...

so i'll sing till i bring her more roses.

dw

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I wish she'd leave...

Contributed by In_a_While on Monday, 20th June 2005 @ 06:46:04 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

i miss all the sadness, that fuels my dark madness
even when darker than blue
hand me the handgun, i can't understand fun
i broke all the candles in you...

a state of decay, comes often to play
when my skin begins to unravel
or rather it crawls, up ladders and walls
when does it ever not travel...?

i wish she would leave, so i could now grieve
then pass into madness above
instead i'm on earth, left burnt at my birth
nothing prepares me for love...

she's all the flames, that flicker mind games
i'm burnt at every which turn
yes i'm in love, it's what i'm afraid of
never will hate let me learn...

so i'll sing till i bring her more roses.

dw

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Re: I wish she'd leave... (User Rating: 1 )
by Mild_Tempest on Monday, 20th June 2005 @ 07:28:44 PM AEST
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Great poem. I loved the unique rhyming style. Keep it up.

Re: I wish she'd leave... (User Rating: 1 )
by Shattered_soul on Monday, 20th June 2005 @ 08:27:31 PM AEST
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that was so good, i only wish i could feel this way though, maybe someday i will but keep up the awasome rhyming, i am envy of your skill

Shattered soul

Re: I wish she'd leave... (User Rating: 1 )
by waos on Monday, 20th June 2005 @ 11:34:13 PM AEST
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That was really good, sweet, kinda sad, and good. I enjoyed reading it.

~Kara

Re: I wish she'd leave... (User Rating: 1 )
by sride686 on Tuesday, 21st June 2005 @ 07:17:10 AM AEST
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Well DW you always find someway to write amazing work your mind ran dry one time but before and now after it never stops. You write work that really sucks my mind into your words and they are much enjoyed. This write was sad but happy at the same time. I know what that fear is and pain in love. Its pain because that’s all you know and have learned from past loves. I hope all goes well and I look forward to more of your writes. Take care always, your friend….Steve

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