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Array ( [sid] => 9880 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => A World of Rain [time] => 2003-01-06 17:20:00 [hometext] => I couldn't decide between sad, angry, or dark. Scratch that... the fact that I chose angry means that I guess I did decide after all... [bodytext] => To write your heart onto a page
And have it thrown away.
To let your mind a sordid rage
And know you'll surely pay.
To feel as though you've lost a fight
And lost all hope as well.
To know you'll never be as right
Or outlive your own hell.
To be unravelled, mad with pain
And lack the will to mend.
To stand in this, a world of rain,
And never know its end. [comments] => 7 [counter] => 279 [topic] => 6 [informant] => SmokinJoeEvil [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

A World of Rain

Contributed by SmokinJoeEvil on Monday, 6th January 2003 @ 05:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

To write your heart onto a page
And have it thrown away.
To let your mind a sordid rage
And know you'll surely pay.
To feel as though you've lost a fight
And lost all hope as well.
To know you'll never be as right
Or outlive your own hell.
To be unravelled, mad with pain
And lack the will to mend.
To stand in this, a world of rain,
And never know its end.

Copyright © SmokinJoeEvil ... [ 2003-01-06 17:20:00]
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Re: A World of Rain (User Rating: 1 )
by EmSal on Monday, 6th January 2003 @ 10:01:05 PM AEST
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Great poem...so true.."And lack the will to mend." That is so true...I liked this poem!!!

Re: A World of Rain (User Rating: 1 )
by sublime on Tuesday, 7th January 2003 @ 12:43:25 AM AEST
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That's some pretty powerful stuff Joe. I like it a lot.

Re: A World of Rain (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Tuesday, 7th January 2003 @ 01:45:04 AM AEST
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And oh how many of us have felt this way so often....and never know it's end.....that line stuck with me deeply, this is sooo beautifully written, it's unique...thanks for sharing it...
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:.

Re: A World of Rain (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Tuesday, 7th January 2003 @ 03:21:56 PM AEST
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Great poem. Your first two lines are brilliant.

Re: A World of Rain (User Rating: 1 )
by mystical_illusion on Tuesday, 7th January 2003 @ 04:23:04 PM AEST
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Very well done, kept my attension and intrest thoughout the entire thing. Good job =)
-kelly

Re: A World of Rain (User Rating: 1 )
by Kirby on Monday, 7th April 2003 @ 01:08:58 PM AEST
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wow hun I really like thi spoem, it's my first one I read of yous and not the last! I like!

Re: A World of Rain (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 04:30:50 PM AEST
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This one took my breath away.
Stitch

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