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Array ( [sid] => 98887 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => a joke of love [time] => 2005-06-21 20:39:18 [hometext] => i dedicate this proudly to my boyfriend. i want to show him i much i care now. [bodytext] => like sipping wine across the table from one another in hoping to catch one anothers eye
surprising, but scandalous i think and i hoping you can read my mind so i want have to lie
i loved you once and i loved you again, but this time i believed i loved with a life of pretend
i honestly think and now know that i never loved you
i never wanted no part of you
you only had me by a string and now the thread has been cut and there is nothing left of
this of what we had here that you can do
my mind is now feeling a breath of fresh air
i lived by your rules
i was physically, emotionally, and mentally abused
i realize i have to become a fighter now and let you go
i'm stronger and yes wiser and i ready with my boxing gloves to take one blow
i struggled with this pain for so long in my heart
you didn't give a damn about me, but as usual you watch without any help me shatter apart
it takes a real man to care for someone and love strongly and hold a real womans hand
i need someone who loves me for me and my feelings and space i need , he quites understand
powerful i must say
and it took me longer than a day
i no longer have to push and shove
i through with your games , lies and your little joke of love
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a joke of love

Contributed by seci on Tuesday, 21st June 2005 @ 08:39:18 PM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems



like sipping wine across the table from one another in hoping to catch one anothers eye
surprising, but scandalous i think and i hoping you can read my mind so i want have to lie
i loved you once and i loved you again, but this time i believed i loved with a life of pretend
i honestly think and now know that i never loved you
i never wanted no part of you
you only had me by a string and now the thread has been cut and there is nothing left of
this of what we had here that you can do
my mind is now feeling a breath of fresh air
i lived by your rules
i was physically, emotionally, and mentally abused
i realize i have to become a fighter now and let you go
i'm stronger and yes wiser and i ready with my boxing gloves to take one blow
i struggled with this pain for so long in my heart
you didn't give a damn about me, but as usual you watch without any help me shatter apart
it takes a real man to care for someone and love strongly and hold a real womans hand
i need someone who loves me for me and my feelings and space i need , he quites understand
powerful i must say
and it took me longer than a day
i no longer have to push and shove
i through with your games , lies and your little joke of love




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Re: a joke of love (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Tuesday, 21st June 2005 @ 09:08:15 PM AEST
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Wow seci---powerful stuff...Your emotions are fully felt in this, and as I said to you before, follow your heart, and I'm glad you are.
Especially in light of reading a couple details I didn't know of before....Run and don't look back girl!!! Your wording in this write is excellent, and again...you're making the right choice....Take Care.
Scorp.


Re: a joke of love (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 22nd June 2005 @ 03:44:26 AM AEST
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Alrite!
I salute u 4 being stronger.
Abuse sux.
Stay strong.
huggs
emy




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