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A comets tail scars the skies,
Sadly I know what this means,
Tonight a broken heart doth cry,
The planets brighten for support,
The universe sheds its starry tears,
Sympathizing for their soul,
Comforting them through their worst fear,
Jupiter will bow to Pluto,
The Sun will blaze the Moon,
Trying to lift their spirit,
The winds will whisper them a tune,
The waves will carry their thoughts away,
The grass will hold their memories,
The crickets will chirp Sinatra,
As they curl up to their knees,
Time will selflessly stop,
Giving itself to them to mourn,
Mountains will bend graciously,
A new star will be born.
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Universal Sympathy

Contributed by shnyzz on Wednesday, 22nd June 2005 @ 03:13:58 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

As I look to the heavens above,
A comets tail scars the skies,
Sadly I know what this means,
Tonight a broken heart doth cry,
The planets brighten for support,
The universe sheds its starry tears,
Sympathizing for their soul,
Comforting them through their worst fear,
Jupiter will bow to Pluto,
The Sun will blaze the Moon,
Trying to lift their spirit,
The winds will whisper them a tune,
The waves will carry their thoughts away,
The grass will hold their memories,
The crickets will chirp Sinatra,
As they curl up to their knees,
Time will selflessly stop,
Giving itself to them to mourn,
Mountains will bend graciously,
A new star will be born.

Copyright © shnyzz ... [ 2005-06-22 03:13:58]
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Re: Universal Sympathy (User Rating: 1 )
by europeanprincess on Wednesday, 1st February 2006 @ 09:54:31 PM AEST
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I am at awe with this poem. I can so see what the sky above looks like in your eyes. I love space and hope one day to see it the way you wrote it. If I am completly wrong about how you wrote this poem, I will die.

Re: Universal Sympathy (User Rating: 1 )
by Shizzy on Friday, 24th February 2006 @ 10:49:26 PM AEST
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Good poem Eric nice work you should look at mine somtime. This is your bro Tommy my name on here is Shizzy. lata

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