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Array ( [sid] => 98962 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Jacob [time] => 2005-06-22 12:29:08 [hometext] => its hard for me to post this... i dont know why.... i guess its because it feels right [bodytext] => Glowing in an empty cupboard
the glass mirrors lights
shades around the room
my eyes buried in a dark sink,
breath....

trying to chew the beef
supper and than wash off my hands
slowly pacing to my bed
a hanglight swinging in my head

sleep comes in at 10:16
wake, i wake at 5:15
cant sleep for a while
Im sorry about my wife
hanging in the bathroom
she was all i could ever love
Life came down to soon...

Water in my lungs
Water down the stairs
I was meant
to go nowhere

here it goes

She speaks in song
" Dont be scared
please dont be afraid as the lights drop
Beautiful jacob
Beautiful night
cast away
cast away, away into starlight
Dont be afraid,
Your in my arms tonight..... [comments] => 1 [counter] => 221 [topic] => 21 [informant] => feathercut [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

Jacob

Contributed by feathercut on Wednesday, 22nd June 2005 @ 12:29:08 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

Glowing in an empty cupboard
the glass mirrors lights
shades around the room
my eyes buried in a dark sink,
breath....

trying to chew the beef
supper and than wash off my hands
slowly pacing to my bed
a hanglight swinging in my head

sleep comes in at 10:16
wake, i wake at 5:15
cant sleep for a while
Im sorry about my wife
hanging in the bathroom
she was all i could ever love
Life came down to soon...

Water in my lungs
Water down the stairs
I was meant
to go nowhere

here it goes

She speaks in song
" Dont be scared
please dont be afraid as the lights drop
Beautiful jacob
Beautiful night
cast away
cast away, away into starlight
Dont be afraid,
Your in my arms tonight.....

Copyright © feathercut ... [ 2005-06-22 12:29:08]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Jacob (User Rating: 1 )
by weepingprophet on Wednesday, 22nd June 2005 @ 01:25:23 PM AEST
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if ever there were a miracle in this world it would be this peice of art. there is no one on this site that matches the intelligence and the beauty the grave simplicity and hollow complexity of this peice. you have written a door into a new world cherish your curse, it blesses those that betray it for sport. you can write and it will turn on you for the best~weepingprophet

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