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Array ( [sid] => 99005 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => BREAKUP [time] => 2005-06-22 19:27:31 [hometext] => [bodytext] => WE'VE REACHED THAT MOMENT
WHEN MY LIPS SHOULD STAY SEALED
BUT YOU WANT TO HEAR SOMETHING
EVEN THOUGH IT ISN'T REAL
I'VE COME TO THAT POINT
WHEN THERE'S NOTHING LEFT TO SAY
AND YET YOU WANT EXPRESSION
YOU HAVE TO HAVE YOUR WAY...
YOU SAY THAT THIS MOMENT CAN BE A BREAKTHOUGH
I FEEL A BREAKUP
THAT THIS IS A TIME TO START ANEW
SOMEONE SAID TO ME
HAVEN'T HEARD YOU FOR AWHILE
THAT MUST MEAN YOU'RE HAPPY
I JUST LOOKED AT HIM AND SMILED
WHEN PEOPLE THINK THEY KNOW YOU
THE WORDS COME ROLLING OUT
BUT ME, I PREFER NOT TO SPURT WORDS
WHEN THERE IS NOTHING TO TALK ABOUT
IT TAKES SOME FOLKS FOREVER
BEFORE THEY GET A CLUE
WELL, I DON'T NEED FOREVER
I JUST HAVE TO LOOK AT YOU. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 147 [topic] => 22 [informant] => storm [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

BREAKUP

Contributed by storm on Wednesday, 22nd June 2005 @ 07:27:31 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

WE'VE REACHED THAT MOMENT
WHEN MY LIPS SHOULD STAY SEALED
BUT YOU WANT TO HEAR SOMETHING
EVEN THOUGH IT ISN'T REAL
I'VE COME TO THAT POINT
WHEN THERE'S NOTHING LEFT TO SAY
AND YET YOU WANT EXPRESSION
YOU HAVE TO HAVE YOUR WAY...
YOU SAY THAT THIS MOMENT CAN BE A BREAKTHOUGH
I FEEL A BREAKUP
THAT THIS IS A TIME TO START ANEW
SOMEONE SAID TO ME
HAVEN'T HEARD YOU FOR AWHILE
THAT MUST MEAN YOU'RE HAPPY
I JUST LOOKED AT HIM AND SMILED
WHEN PEOPLE THINK THEY KNOW YOU
THE WORDS COME ROLLING OUT
BUT ME, I PREFER NOT TO SPURT WORDS
WHEN THERE IS NOTHING TO TALK ABOUT
IT TAKES SOME FOLKS FOREVER
BEFORE THEY GET A CLUE
WELL, I DON'T NEED FOREVER
I JUST HAVE TO LOOK AT YOU.

Copyright © storm ... [ 2005-06-22 19:27:31]
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Re: BREAKUP (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 22nd June 2005 @ 09:34:40 PM AEST
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Nice poem.

Re: BREAKUP (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Wednesday, 22nd June 2005 @ 11:26:51 PM AEST
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Well written, but I can't say the caps make it any better. The look and feel is not too poetic. Might want to rethink that style. Keep writing.

Andrew

Re: BREAKUP (User Rating: 1 )
by blackholesun on Thursday, 23rd June 2005 @ 02:02:14 AM AEST
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woa~good one lol i just cant bring myself to end my relationship

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