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No More Time
Contributed by
Belcha
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Friday, 24th June 2005 @ 08:50:45 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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No more time to sit and wait
No more time to contemplate
No more time to investigate
No more time to infiltrate
No more time to to change our fate
No more time to re-create
No more time to compensate
No more time were just too late
No more time to bring world peace
No more time to change our ways
No more time to fix the broken
No more time to sing our praise
No more time to stop our death
No more time to take a breath
No more time to show the way
No more time to save the day.
If we dont stop polluting the earth there wont be an earth.
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Belcha
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2005-06-24 08:50:45]
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Re: No More Time
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by budge on
Friday, 24th June 2005 @ 09:12:03 AM AEST
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| eco joe, just wants you to know the worlds gonna blow, so get off jump go!!! |
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Re: No More Time
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by deadheadpoet on
Friday, 24th June 2005 @ 03:50:55 PM AEST
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| RIGHT ON. You said it man. We are killing our Mother every single day. It seems so very many human beings do not give a darn. It saddens me deeply. We as humans are so fake and greedy. Thanks for sharing this write. I thought the repetition of "no more time" was excellent, like a big booming voice of warning. Peace to you, Laura |
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Re: No More Time
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by ilovelillbj on
Tuesday, 4th April 2006 @ 11:38:19 AM AEST
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this is an issue i feel very paasionately about and this poem depicts it beautifully. the ignorance of humans is astounding sometimes and responsibility just doesn't seem a concept we understand. as a poem, u should keep the rhyme scheme consitant, as the first verse is much stronger, but never-the-less, a great write!
x Sarah x |
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