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Array ( [sid] => 99216 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Voices Across The Water [time] => 2005-06-24 13:51:22 [hometext] => This is for you Steve (Puppy_dog_eyes), thank you for being a dear friend....you are a special person. [bodytext] => Voices across the water
Minds exchanging thoughts
About life and times
Plotting a story,
A plan in due time

Mutual trust and respect
A dear friend for eternity
Writing about the sweet little nothings
So meaningless to others
But oh so encouraging to us

Written words appear on our screens
Lines of poetry, music to our eyes
Telling us about our personal self
So open and frankly, they tell us all
This voice across the water,
I will hold dear forever.....

~~Nats~~ [comments] => 4 [counter] => 161 [topic] => 16 [informant] => xXx_Fem_Fatale_xXx [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => FriendshipPoetry )

Voices Across The Water

Contributed by xXx_Fem_Fatale_xXx on Friday, 24th June 2005 @ 01:51:22 PM in AEST
Topic: FriendshipPoetry

Voices across the water
Minds exchanging thoughts
About life and times
Plotting a story,
A plan in due time

Mutual trust and respect
A dear friend for eternity
Writing about the sweet little nothings
So meaningless to others
But oh so encouraging to us

Written words appear on our screens
Lines of poetry, music to our eyes
Telling us about our personal self
So open and frankly, they tell us all
This voice across the water,
I will hold dear forever.....

~~Nats~~

Copyright Â© xXx_Fem_Fatale_xXx ... [ 2005-06-24 13:51:22]
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Re: Voices Across The Water (User Rating: 1 )
by rosethorn100 on Friday, 24th June 2005 @ 03:30:06 PM AEST
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once again another beautiful poem
yes i have to agree steve is a wonderful person in spite of the short i've known him
and yes it is wondeful to have a cherish friendship who always encourage us that there are real true friend out there like you are to me.

hugggggggggggs
love yas girlie as always
roseyyyyyyyy

Re: Voices Across The Water (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 02:52:41 PM AEST
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What words can I put here to express my emotion at reading this nat ?.Certainly whatever I put will not seem to say enough, but from the bottom of my heart I thank you.
To me a true friend is always worth more than any riches in the world......the most precious gift you can give.
I feel truly blessed

Steve
xx

Re: Voices Across The Water (User Rating: 1 )
by jmpy84 on Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 04:57:08 PM AEST
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beautifully done i loved it

Re: Voices Across The Water (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 05:34:00 AM AEST
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That is an amazing write, Nats. Perfect words for a perfect friendship.

And you say, “You don’t know me at all” ;-}

Your poem clearly, with brilliance, shows we can know a part of who you are through your mastering of your gifted words

My favorite words in this one where you do tell us we can know you through your gift, your brilliant poems:

“ Written words appear on our screens
Lines of poetry, music to our eyes
Telling us about our personal self
So open and frankly, they tell us all
This voice across the water,
I will hold dear forever.....”

You seem to still carry the pure innocence from your childhood, the kind heart of children, into your adulthood. That is another perfect and wonderful gift in itself. So many of us lose that when we grow up. You haven't. Never change! Your talent is awesome.

And your friend says it best and he clearly knows: “ a true friend is always worth more than any riches in the world......the most precious gift you can give.”

Yes the most precious you can give is yourself. You are all brilliant.

Huggs,

Tim
:)

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