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no more tears
Contributed by
blackholesun
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Tuesday, 28th June 2005 @ 04:14:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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leaving you is hard to do,even though im sure we are through,
i dont care i must let go,no love did you ever show,
how am i suppose to know,how to say goodbye,
im sitting here allone i just want to cry,
but you never shed a tear for me,so why should i?
im always the one that wants to die,
but not anymore,im no longer your whore ,
my new love says im so much more,and that i deserve better,
so here i am writing this letter.
i hope you understand you are no longer my man,
i hope u will see how happy i can be,if someone gives there loving time to me.
if you love me ,let me go,there is someone who will care and let it show,
i have room to grow in my heart,but it wont be repaired untill we are apart,
no more tears,no more scars,no more ...its no longer ours
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2005-06-28 16:14:17]
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Re: no more tears
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by forsaken_soul33 on
Tuesday, 28th June 2005 @ 04:21:50 PM AEST
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wow, i really enjoyed your poem. That's good you left him. You should look for happines, not try to create with someone who doesn't care. Well i hope you stay happy
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Re: no more tears
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 1st July 2005 @ 02:20:58 AM AEST
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| Let'em go but don't rush into another rebounds don't work give yourself time to love yourself then all other love will come naturally |
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Re: no more tears
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by Strawberry on
Sunday, 12th February 2006 @ 09:17:04 AM AEST
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| very nice. u did the right thing by leavin him. u deserve better. hope u have better relationships. keep up the great work. sammi jo |
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