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Narrow Eyes
Contributed by
living_dead_girl
on
Tuesday, 28th June 2005 @ 09:47:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Narrow eyes fixing in on you
They're doing everything they can do
Life slipping away so slow
Sending you to the pits below
Docters try to save you're life
Repair the damage done by the knife
They try to tell you there's so much more
So much on Earth worth living for
But all you see is the big twilight
You want to know what's beyond the white light
I gaze into your narrow eyes
I can see the truth as well as the lies
Narrow eyes fixing in on you
You're too far gone for us to pull you through
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2005-06-28 21:47:24]
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Re: Narrow Eyes
(User Rating: 1 )
by WorthlesSanity666 on
Tuesday, 28th June 2005 @ 09:53:24 PM AEST
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| Great poem. It flowed very well! I've been there before... it's a dark place where no one should ever have to go. You'd be surprised how long of a cord they can make to save you, though. |
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