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About Dreams
Contributed by
bgj
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Wednesday, 29th June 2005 @ 02:39:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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Dreams of love
Dreams of lust
Dreams of things that crumble to dust.
Dreams of peace
Dreams of hate
Dreams of what we give and take.
Dreams of war
Dreams of goodwill
Dreams of things we often feel.
Dreams of luxury
Dreams of success
Dreams of things you love the best.
Dreams of fear
Dreams of pain
Dreams of all you hope to gain.
Dreams of sorrow
Dreams of dark hues
Dreams of those you fear to lose.
Dreams of heaven
Dreams of hell
Dreams of things you dare not tell.
Shattered dreams they make us cry
From time we're born to time we die.
What is the sum of all these things?
There is truth and lies in all our dreams!
Bobby G. Jarrard
Copyright 2005 by Bobby G. Jarrard
Copyright ©
bgj
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Re: About Dreams
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by lovingcritters on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 02:37:31 PM AEST
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Dear Bgj,
This is a wonderfully written poem, that enchances the form of repetition. I really enjoyed reading this also. Much knowledge inbetween those lines, and is so very true.
You have much much talent!
And thank you so much for gracing mine with your fine critique.
Warm love
lovingcritters
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