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In a land full of darkness
In a place full of fear
She sits in a chair
Shedding her tears

She’s full of this fear
This terrible fear
She feels so alone
Her world is unclear

She’s dancing a dance
Around the dark room
She’s in such a trance
Looking for a way out of her gloom

As the walls close in beside her
She’s knows that she will die
She’s lost inside the darkened room
As she begins to cry
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Fear

Contributed by PoisonousPyscho on Wednesday, 29th June 2005 @ 09:38:34 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Fear

In a land full of darkness
In a place full of fear
She sits in a chair
Shedding her tears

She’s full of this fear
This terrible fear
She feels so alone
Her world is unclear

She’s dancing a dance
Around the dark room
She’s in such a trance
Looking for a way out of her gloom

As the walls close in beside her
She’s knows that she will die
She’s lost inside the darkened room
As she begins to cry

Copyright © PoisonousPyscho ... [ 2005-06-29 21:38:34]
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Re: Fear (User Rating: 1 )
by spazz911 on Wednesday, 29th June 2005 @ 10:02:26 PM AEST
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deep, moving, real, this is an incredable poem and here on ypdc u have people to help u, yea i no were like cyber people but hey, worth it, if u wann hand, i can help, pm me
kc

Re: Fear (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 29th June 2005 @ 11:21:35 PM AEST
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Very sad but well written.
U should get help from a Dr. or go to your emergency room. I take meds to counter act depression.
luv, huggs, prayer,
emy

Re: Fear (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Wednesday, 29th June 2005 @ 11:43:03 PM AEST
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very deep and sad.
very great write.

Re: Fear (User Rating: 1 )
by justme03 on Thursday, 30th June 2005 @ 11:56:23 AM AEST
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hey gurl
ya alwasy got me
e-mail me whenever and ill reply back
im here 4 ya cuz im going thru the same depression thing and it aint fun.
luv ya always
~Kortnie~ (hugs)
p.s great poem!

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