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Array ( [sid] => 99672 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I Live For You [time] => 2005-06-30 01:54:59 [hometext] => I wanted to make a poem that someone could relate to but not many could describe. I did my best to describe how I felt... I hope I did it well. [bodytext] => You're all I've got
Please hold me tight
Don't let me collapse on this dark dead night
Oh, baby, please comfort me
Without you I can feel nothing

I sleep to dream of you
I feel to know if your pain is true
I cry so you don't ever have to
I breathe to make sure the air is new
I live through you
I live for you
I'd die if I couldn't be with you


You're all I've got
Please hold me tight
You're all that I live for from day to night
You say to me
Oh, baby, don't leave me
You know I won't say no
You know I could never let you go [comments] => 5 [counter] => 177 [topic] => 2 [informant] => AmyLee4Ever [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
I Live For You

Contributed by AmyLee4Ever on Thursday, 30th June 2005 @ 01:54:59 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



You're all I've got
Please hold me tight
Don't let me collapse on this dark dead night
Oh, baby, please comfort me
Without you I can feel nothing

I sleep to dream of you
I feel to know if your pain is true
I cry so you don't ever have to
I breathe to make sure the air is new
I live through you
I live for you
I'd die if I couldn't be with you


You're all I've got
Please hold me tight
You're all that I live for from day to night
You say to me
Oh, baby, don't leave me
You know I won't say no
You know I could never let you go




Copyright © AmyLee4Ever ... [ 2005-06-30 01:54:59]
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Re: I Live For You (User Rating: 1 )
by ForeverAlone on Thursday, 30th June 2005 @ 02:22:22 AM AEST
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Me like me like alot..lol..very good structure and I RELATE TO SO WELL..haha..you succeed...weeee...::runs around in circles for a minute and then gets back to business:: Great Job - again

~Clark


Re: I Live For You (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 30th June 2005 @ 04:52:06 AM AEST
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Awesome writing.
huggs,
emy


Re: I Live For You (User Rating: 1 )
by In_a_while on Thursday, 30th June 2005 @ 10:33:48 AM AEST
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wow! What a loving and strong poem.. i'm envious of the emotions you spelled out in this piece.
keep up the great writing!

dw


Re: I Live For You (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 01:53:34 AM AEST
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Your writes always bring a smile to my face.
I'm just jelous cause my girl wont do those things for me. Maybe you could talk some sense into her lol


Re: I Live For You (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 05:52:53 PM AEST
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Jodi u pour out all ur inner feelings and fears. You love, but are scared to lose. You've captured ur emotions so well in ur poem. You're a compassionate person and the fear of losing the one u love holds u back. Am I right? A superb heartfelt write that touches the heart. Well done Jodi.
Hugs,
Dreamer




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