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Array ( [sid] => 99830 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Reserved [time] => 2005-07-01 19:33:11 [hometext] => Questioning love I guess...so to speak [bodytext] => As you walk on by, will you call my name?
or will you walk away

When I phone, will you greet me?
or will silence speak

Would you acknowledge me, if we passed on the street?
or would I be lost in the crowd

If I wrote you a love letter, would you reply?
or would it be tossed in the fire

What time of day do you take, to think of me?
or am I the last thing on your mind

Where can I meet you, so we could talk?
or do you have nothing to say

How should I help you, out of your shell?
or would you rather be left

Who does your heart sing for, any chance me?
or is it forever mute
[comments] => 11 [counter] => 249 [topic] => 48 [informant] => hauntedscorp [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 51 [ratings] => 11 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Reserved

Contributed by hauntedscorp on Friday, 1st July 2005 @ 07:33:11 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

As you walk on by, will you call my name?
or will you walk away

When I phone, will you greet me?
or will silence speak

Would you acknowledge me, if we passed on the street?
or would I be lost in the crowd

If I wrote you a love letter, would you reply?
or would it be tossed in the fire

What time of day do you take, to think of me?
or am I the last thing on your mind

Where can I meet you, so we could talk?
or do you have nothing to say

How should I help you, out of your shell?
or would you rather be left

Who does your heart sing for, any chance me?
or is it forever mute

Copyright © hauntedscorp ... [ 2005-07-01 19:33:11]
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Re: Reserved (User Rating: 1 )
by ForeverAlone on Friday, 1st July 2005 @ 07:57:49 PM AEST
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hmm, i like the thought in this, its very appealing to ask questions like that, the mystery is something that keeps them coming back, great job

~Clark

Re: Reserved (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Friday, 1st July 2005 @ 08:14:52 PM AEST
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loved the style here my friend your always a joy to read
Michelle

Re: Reserved (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Friday, 1st July 2005 @ 08:50:54 PM AEST
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Scorp an interesting and thought provoking piece of poetry. Ure a truly talented poetess whose amazing abilitly shines through her brilliant work. Another outstanding piece from u.
hugs,
dreamer

Re: Reserved (User Rating: 1 )
by LoveStruck_Hippie on Friday, 1st July 2005 @ 09:24:03 PM AEST
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This really touched me. It very much expresses alot of the feelings I have been having lately.

Re: Reserved (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 2nd July 2005 @ 01:43:38 AM AEST
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I must say that I am sure many of us have had these same thoughts (questions?) but you express them in such a compelling fashion. Another awesome write from the one & only Scorp.

Re: Reserved (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Saturday, 2nd July 2005 @ 02:46:57 AM AEST
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A very profound write. I like the way it all blends together to form a unique poem.

Cool write Scorp.

Jane xoxox

Re: Reserved (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 2nd July 2005 @ 01:48:29 PM AEST
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Very thought provoking and moving write!!! Beautifully done,

Leia

Re: Reserved (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 3rd July 2005 @ 03:50:23 AM AEST
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this is very touching I like the what time of day part great writing will always read and comment on your poems

Re: Reserved (User Rating: 1 )
by AmyLee4Ever on Sunday, 3rd July 2005 @ 01:31:06 PM AEST
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Wow... I really liked this one. Really really like it. Lol... until now I never put any thought into how a silence speak does make sense. It makes a lot of sense actually. This poem grabbed me in even from the title. Great write yourself, and, once again, thanks for the comments on mine...
Jodi

Re: Reserved (User Rating: 1 )
by Man_On_High on Sunday, 3rd July 2005 @ 05:07:07 PM AEST
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Scorp..I love the longing in this..
but I wonder..
(scartchin' my head)

Is it worth it..

Your friend and confidant..

B

Re: Reserved (User Rating: 1 )
by sweetangeluk on Monday, 4th July 2005 @ 12:51:40 PM AEST
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Another awesome write

Astounding

Love Angelxxxx

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