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We look, we touch, but not a word
Quiet in the airless night
As the lightning takes it's flight

Flashing, sizzling, all around
Dancing round us on the ground
Sheer excitement in the air
You and me, our love affair

I your servant, you my king
I'm little dove with wounded wing
Forbidden love, can never be
For my lord I am not free

Maid of honour to your queen
Never heard and never seen
Her life of hate,no love to give
You found me, began to live

So together, we will go
Through the storm, electric's flow
To a land, a secret glen
DEATH! where we can live again [comments] => 4 [counter] => 153 [topic] => 40 [informant] => gwenevere [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => fantasy )

The Storm

Contributed by gwenevere on Sunday, 3rd July 2005 @ 03:17:54 PM in AEST
Topic: fantasy

I stand here in the garden my lord
We look, we touch, but not a word
Quiet in the airless night
As the lightning takes it's flight

Flashing, sizzling, all around
Dancing round us on the ground
Sheer excitement in the air
You and me, our love affair

I your servant, you my king
I'm little dove with wounded wing
Forbidden love, can never be
For my lord I am not free

Maid of honour to your queen
Never heard and never seen
Her life of hate,no love to give
You found me, began to live

So together, we will go
Through the storm, electric's flow
To a land, a secret glen
DEATH! where we can live again

Copyright © gwenevere ... [ 2005-07-03 15:17:54]
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Re: The Storm (User Rating: 1 )
by wizard on Monday, 4th July 2005 @ 01:04:34 AM AEST
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perfection in an affair...i love it.

wizard

Re: The Storm (User Rating: 1 )
by bernard on Monday, 4th July 2005 @ 02:10:30 AM AEST
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I cannot make up my mind . A prayer, a poem a declaration of a love. This is lovely you have great talent for writing Ros. Have you ever tried writing stories? short stories are the best to start with and then perhaps a novel. Love novels are always on demand. Give it a try? I wish you all the best from bernard.

Re: The Storm (User Rating: 1 )
by DorianChambers on Monday, 4th July 2005 @ 01:23:22 PM AEST
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Lovely peice of writting . . .

Ben

Re: The Storm (User Rating: 1 )
by AmyLee4Ever on Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 06:48:27 PM AEST
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Amazing... it is wonderfully written. I admire the whole meaning of this poem so greatly and I love how you write it as well. Nice write...
Jodi

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