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Array ( [sid] => 151225 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => heart [time] => 2009-07-02 08:37:54 [hometext] => i miss him so much and all the stupid things he does without him i feel incomplete but i lost him maybe forever maybe just until he relises [bodytext] => my smile is now a frown
my heart is broken
my life feels empty without you
i have never tried with a relationship before
but i did with you
i gave you all i could
i even let you be my first time
it wasnt a mistake
i jus wish
you either had never kissed me
or left me for the girl who broke your heart
you said you loved me
what a suprise you didnt mean it
i jus cant belive in the samde week you broke a promise
and brpoke up with me
when i saw them words on the screen
i felt hollow inside
tears fell down my face
i couldnt stop them
i wish i had listened to what my head was saying
its always too good to happen to me
i didnt hurt anyone this time
but i got hurt whats fair about that
this life feels so unreal at times
somethings can make you so happy
but yet give the most valuble thing you have
what happens it gets broken
so from now on
ill guard my heart with all my strenth
build walls as high as they can go
and build walls behind them
i will never trust a guy with my heart
again
cause i really cant go through this again
just like i said the first time
1 thing i want to say is
i love you even if you dont love me
xxxx always unfortuantly [comments] => 2 [counter] => 168 [topic] => 22 [informant] => -nik-91- [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
heart

Contributed by -nik-91- on Thursday, 2nd July 2009 @ 08:37:54 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



my smile is now a frown
my heart is broken
my life feels empty without you
i have never tried with a relationship before
but i did with you
i gave you all i could
i even let you be my first time
it wasnt a mistake
i jus wish
you either had never kissed me
or left me for the girl who broke your heart
you said you loved me
what a suprise you didnt mean it
i jus cant belive in the samde week you broke a promise
and brpoke up with me
when i saw them words on the screen
i felt hollow inside
tears fell down my face
i couldnt stop them
i wish i had listened to what my head was saying
its always too good to happen to me
i didnt hurt anyone this time
but i got hurt whats fair about that
this life feels so unreal at times
somethings can make you so happy
but yet give the most valuble thing you have
what happens it gets broken
so from now on
ill guard my heart with all my strenth
build walls as high as they can go
and build walls behind them
i will never trust a guy with my heart
again
cause i really cant go through this again
just like i said the first time
1 thing i want to say is
i love you even if you dont love me
xxxx always unfortuantly




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this is sad


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by JamesStockdale on Tuesday, 28th July 2015 @ 06:33:20 AM AEST
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Incredible angst indeed.................




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