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Array ( [sid] => 170309 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Unraveled [time] => 2012-01-19 06:41:37 [hometext] => [bodytext] => The pain and jealousy,
the rage and self-loathing,
all scorching my broken heart.

I try time and time again.
No matter how many times,
I will never be the one for him.

My life and heart shattered.
The many pieces scattered,
Thrown across the universe.

Thrown as for them to never return.
My heart broken and unfix-able.
I've tried, then cried.

Who will be the one to fix me?
To fix this broken doll.
I may never know.

Always and forever unraveled,
Forever the pain and jealousy.
I hide them from his eyes.

He never sees that it truly scars me.
My best friend he has.
Her not knowing what truly has gone on.

I wish time and time again,
Wishing for love to heal me,
For no more pain, no more.

Though it's still there.
I fight always.
Lying hidden from all eyes.

My heart about to explode.
Only after shall he see
The pain he has caused me.

Without the pain, I'm numb.
I feel nothing.
Either numb or pain.

I'd rather feel pain than nothing at all.
Reminding me I can care.
Reminding me that I'm alive. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 148 [topic] => 75 [informant] => krissy26 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => anguished )
Unraveled

Contributed by krissy26 on Thursday, 19th January 2012 @ 06:41:37 AM in AEST
Topic: anguished



The pain and jealousy,
the rage and self-loathing,
all scorching my broken heart.

I try time and time again.
No matter how many times,
I will never be the one for him.

My life and heart shattered.
The many pieces scattered,
Thrown across the universe.

Thrown as for them to never return.
My heart broken and unfix-able.
I've tried, then cried.

Who will be the one to fix me?
To fix this broken doll.
I may never know.

Always and forever unraveled,
Forever the pain and jealousy.
I hide them from his eyes.

He never sees that it truly scars me.
My best friend he has.
Her not knowing what truly has gone on.

I wish time and time again,
Wishing for love to heal me,
For no more pain, no more.

Though it's still there.
I fight always.
Lying hidden from all eyes.

My heart about to explode.
Only after shall he see
The pain he has caused me.

Without the pain, I'm numb.
I feel nothing.
Either numb or pain.

I'd rather feel pain than nothing at all.
Reminding me I can care.
Reminding me that I'm alive.




Copyright © krissy26 ... [ 2012-01-19 06:41:37]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Unraveled (User Rating: 1 )
by Kimo on Thursday, 19th January 2012 @ 08:44:43 AM AEST
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I really felt your pain.


Re: Unraveled (User Rating: 1 )
by girish on Thursday, 19th January 2012 @ 11:29:35 PM AEST
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Words bring love very much. I had experienced and had my love. read my poems which will give you the clue.
Only one life will soon be past
Only what`s done for love will last


Re: Unraveled (User Rating: 1 )
by Shadowman on Friday, 20th January 2012 @ 11:31:18 AM AEST
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This hit the very pit of my soul..
I can feel the frustration, loathing, and the sheer despair as if I wrote this myself.
I do not know the problem but...I do know that there is always hope..you jut have to know where to look. Great write


Re: Unraveled (User Rating: 1 )
by krissy26 on Saturday, 14th April 2012 @ 02:33:38 PM AEST
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Really the best friend thing just came to mind. It was just some girl. He's my best friend.




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