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Array ( [sid] => 170401 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Last rhyme [time] => 2012-01-23 05:33:03 [hometext] => Please comment and let me know how you liked the poem, criticisms are welcome. [bodytext] => Hey, you said we will meet later, didnít you?
I know I donít mean much, but, I hope your word has some value.
We were so great together once,
I Hope now I am a little more than a nuisance.
I am sorry for all the fights we had, I was jealous,
I hope you know that you are still my precious.
I know I am not in top 7 of your priorities,
And I hope you know, by writing this, I donít mean any malice.


I wish I were some more,
But doesnít everyone?
I wish you would have those feelings for me again,
The ones which you donít have for just anyoneÖ
You are my only fantasy,
I wish I were yours,
You are my biggest ecstasy,
The one who gave me my first Ďcheersí.


You were my only friend,
I wish you knew.
There were many, I kept for the trend,
But none of them trueÖ
I told you things,
Things no one else in the world knew about me.
And I had lots and lots of dreams,
But none of them as good as Ďweí.



I wish it hadnít ended so soon,
I look at our future, all I see is gloom.
Did I not ask for forgiveness enough?
If thatís the case, I am sorryÖ
Please donít be so rough
Sometimes my behavior is illusory.


I know I made some mistakes, for which I must atone,
But none of them so grave, for you to leave me alone.
Didnít I tell you? I love you.
The kind of love, I only give to a few.
The only thing I want from you, is your time,
Is that really such a great crime?
I wouldíve waited for years and years for you,
I wish you werenít my best friend,
For then, I neednít continue
But you are, and I canít live without you, why donít you apprehend?


ďIf his love is true, and blood is red,
Iíd even marry hunchback of notre dameĒ
Isnít that what you said?
I know you said it in the heat of the moment, you are not to blame.


I was once a merry man, and I fell in the pit of love,
I didnít want to be rescued, coz you were so close,
I shooed the ones above,
I was so happy; it felt so real, it was like time just froze.
And then it happened, so suddenly, out of thin air,
I looked around, and searched for you, you were no more there,


Itís sad to know, I am alone here now,
But donít worry girl, Iíll manage somehow.
Itís sad to know, youíve fallen again,
I wish the pit was mine,
You have nothing to lose and everything to gain,
I guess itís just not my time.


Please forgive me, I am weak,
When you look at me like that, I just cannot speak,
Forgive me, I was so impatient,
I know it wasnít pleasant.
Forgive me I made you cry,
For some reason, I just have to tryÖ
Forgive me, I made you worry,
Just stop sulking and smile already.


I wonít be corny anymore, just one last time,
Bear with me for now, this is and will be, my very last rhyme.
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 129 [topic] => 55 [informant] => Boldpen [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => dedicatedpoems )
The Last rhyme

Contributed by Boldpen on Monday, 23rd January 2012 @ 05:33:03 AM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems



Hey, you said we will meet later, didnít you?
I know I donít mean much, but, I hope your word has some value.
We were so great together once,
I Hope now I am a little more than a nuisance.
I am sorry for all the fights we had, I was jealous,
I hope you know that you are still my precious.
I know I am not in top 7 of your priorities,
And I hope you know, by writing this, I donít mean any malice.


I wish I were some more,
But doesnít everyone?
I wish you would have those feelings for me again,
The ones which you donít have for just anyoneÖ
You are my only fantasy,
I wish I were yours,
You are my biggest ecstasy,
The one who gave me my first Ďcheersí.


You were my only friend,
I wish you knew.
There were many, I kept for the trend,
But none of them trueÖ
I told you things,
Things no one else in the world knew about me.
And I had lots and lots of dreams,
But none of them as good as Ďweí.



I wish it hadnít ended so soon,
I look at our future, all I see is gloom.
Did I not ask for forgiveness enough?
If thatís the case, I am sorryÖ
Please donít be so rough
Sometimes my behavior is illusory.


I know I made some mistakes, for which I must atone,
But none of them so grave, for you to leave me alone.
Didnít I tell you? I love you.
The kind of love, I only give to a few.
The only thing I want from you, is your time,
Is that really such a great crime?
I wouldíve waited for years and years for you,
I wish you werenít my best friend,
For then, I neednít continue
But you are, and I canít live without you, why donít you apprehend?


ďIf his love is true, and blood is red,
Iíd even marry hunchback of notre dameĒ
Isnít that what you said?
I know you said it in the heat of the moment, you are not to blame.


I was once a merry man, and I fell in the pit of love,
I didnít want to be rescued, coz you were so close,
I shooed the ones above,
I was so happy; it felt so real, it was like time just froze.
And then it happened, so suddenly, out of thin air,
I looked around, and searched for you, you were no more there,


Itís sad to know, I am alone here now,
But donít worry girl, Iíll manage somehow.
Itís sad to know, youíve fallen again,
I wish the pit was mine,
You have nothing to lose and everything to gain,
I guess itís just not my time.


Please forgive me, I am weak,
When you look at me like that, I just cannot speak,
Forgive me, I was so impatient,
I know it wasnít pleasant.
Forgive me I made you cry,
For some reason, I just have to tryÖ
Forgive me, I made you worry,
Just stop sulking and smile already.


I wonít be corny anymore, just one last time,
Bear with me for now, this is and will be, my very last rhyme.




Copyright © Boldpen ... [ 2012-01-23 05:33:03]
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Re: The Last rhyme (User Rating: 1 )
by Shadowman on Monday, 23rd January 2012 @ 08:35:48 AM AEST
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I can truly feel the pain thru all of these stanzas. Tho I doubt it will be your last, it was a good read. Keep up the good work


Re: The Last rhyme (User Rating: 1 )
by unknown_utopia on Monday, 23rd January 2012 @ 03:06:30 PM AEST
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Great release of emotional torture
I think
this is not the last from you.




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