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Sensational feeling of emotions
my nerves tremble with explosive jolts
No need to worry about shrapnel
this body is made of flesh, not nuts and bolts

Inside of me there is a mind
its control is boundless in many ways
It is the keeper of this body
and this is where it stays

There are no such things as tears
itís used for my souls thirst
Giving it so much energy
emotions about to burst

Some sort of sacred native spirit
speaks the language my soul does understand
When I feel so emotional
I know they dance hand in hand

Shaking this body
with such incredible force
My soul wants to leave
speaking to me with a voice that sounds so hoarse

Feeling like a Cyclopes
both eyes focused in as one
I set my spirit free
from this world I can no longer run

Feeling trapped
in a time and place like no other
I am in control
but itís where I want to be my brother

The world outside my space
is cruel and has no point in reality
So I live my life of emotion
demolishing any hope of sanity



Written on 28 February 2015
Copyright © 2015 E. Wayne Searles All Rights Reserved
http://www.poeticquest-1.biglaunch.net

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Soul Control

Contributed by waynster on Saturday, 28th February 2015 @ 12:22:25 PM in AEST
Topic: oops




Sensational feeling of emotions
my nerves tremble with explosive jolts
No need to worry about shrapnel
this body is made of flesh, not nuts and bolts

Inside of me there is a mind
its control is boundless in many ways
It is the keeper of this body
and this is where it stays

There are no such things as tears
itís used for my souls thirst
Giving it so much energy
emotions about to burst

Some sort of sacred native spirit
speaks the language my soul does understand
When I feel so emotional
I know they dance hand in hand

Shaking this body
with such incredible force
My soul wants to leave
speaking to me with a voice that sounds so hoarse

Feeling like a Cyclopes
both eyes focused in as one
I set my spirit free
from this world I can no longer run

Feeling trapped
in a time and place like no other
I am in control
but itís where I want to be my brother

The world outside my space
is cruel and has no point in reality
So I live my life of emotion
demolishing any hope of sanity



Written on 28 February 2015
Copyright © 2015 E. Wayne Searles All Rights Reserved
http://www.poeticquest-1.biglaunch.net





Copyright © waynster ... [ 2015-02-28 12:22:25]
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Re: Soul Control (User Rating: 1 )
by Beyfoxman5 on Saturday, 28th February 2015 @ 03:11:31 PM AEST
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I love this entire thing, especially the first verse. Great points!

Best,

Fox


Re: Soul Control (User Rating: 1 )
by FireStarter on Wednesday, 25th November 2015 @ 04:11:25 PM AEST
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Its great, i love the first verse :)




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