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Array ( [sid] => 115059 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => when i take my last breath [time] => 2006-02-19 19:12:15 [hometext] => [bodytext] => i want to grow old with you darling
i want life to be good to us
i want a lifetime of memories to
build and cherish around you.

i want to be everything you ever
dreamed i could be and offer you
yet i know one day my name will
be read in the book of names.

when that day, that moment comes,
with my last breath i pledge
to whisper you ahve made every
dream i dared dream come true.

you put the joy seen in my eyes
you put the softness in my touch
the laughter i heard in my voice
the passion when we made love.

few things i have wanted to feel
but a happy life has been one
i love you more than the past, more
than today, even more tomorrow.

you have shown me within my heart
that you are truly unselfish
and my darling, i hope that i also have
shown you the depth of my love.

i will lvoe you each day, as if it was
my last moment to say 'i love you'
my last thought before i fall asleep
will be to feel your kiss in the morning. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 238 [topic] => 2 [informant] => poetry_queen [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
when i take my last breath

Contributed by poetry_queen on Sunday, 19th February 2006 @ 07:12:15 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



i want to grow old with you darling
i want life to be good to us
i want a lifetime of memories to
build and cherish around you.

i want to be everything you ever
dreamed i could be and offer you
yet i know one day my name will
be read in the book of names.

when that day, that moment comes,
with my last breath i pledge
to whisper you ahve made every
dream i dared dream come true.

you put the joy seen in my eyes
you put the softness in my touch
the laughter i heard in my voice
the passion when we made love.

few things i have wanted to feel
but a happy life has been one
i love you more than the past, more
than today, even more tomorrow.

you have shown me within my heart
that you are truly unselfish
and my darling, i hope that i also have
shown you the depth of my love.

i will lvoe you each day, as if it was
my last moment to say 'i love you'
my last thought before i fall asleep
will be to feel your kiss in the morning.




Copyright © poetry_queen ... [ 2006-02-19 19:12:15]
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Re: when i take my last breath (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 19th February 2006 @ 07:51:44 PM AEST
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A good poem, I enjoyed it.


Re: when i take my last breath (User Rating: 1 )
by drtylilsecret on Sunday, 19th February 2006 @ 08:11:43 PM AEST
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that was beautiful, very...honest.

~natalya


Re: when i take my last breath (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Sunday, 19th February 2006 @ 09:25:16 PM AEST
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Really lovely...I enjoyed reading this..
Jenni




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