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Array ( [sid] => 115061 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Song for Dennis -'SINNED" [time] => 2006-02-19 20:11:05 [hometext] => Blessed are the modest and meek, for they shall possess the earth (and heaven too) [bodytext] =>





Note this! - a very precious bard he is,
Known by the pen name “Sinned” Dennis;-
‘Gainst modesty he never ever sinned,
Thus was endowed with Spirit, Pneuma, Wind!

So Modest, and so unobtrusively
He writes and posts his lovely poetry,
Is independent of excessive praise,
But leaves it to the Lord to have His ways.

And Sin,- he hardly ever did commit,
Lo! Sin on him just would not cling and sit.
He dedicates his work in praise of God,
And God does count the comment numbers not.

Nor does considers cliques that rove and roam
(We know the Lord is everywhere at home)
And for the Master’s greater glory t’ is
That “Sinned” does write, -this fortunate “Sinned” Dennis.

Far from the gracious Lord is cliquishness;
Who loves to see His bards autonomous,
At times beyond a poet sis or brother,
Who boost, acclaim, support alone each other.

Halt cliquishness, stop! halt! - lest it will spread
And spoil the rising dough for nurturing bread
Behold -the daily bread of poet -bard,
Who will be left with only rancid lard!

O’er shadowed by the busy site Elite
Sinned moves with faith, - we know from Holy Writ
That manifest will turn things on “that” day
When more than pious folks and poets pray..

Delivered from this comment counting he
From tedium and tribulation free
Can well devote his poems’ noble word
To praise, extol, to laud and thank the Lord!.

The races Winner is who writes for Him
Although the comments may be rare and slim
Dear Comment counters take ye heed- take heed!
T ‘is said the Lord does comments hardly read.:).

But Judge He is, in heaven and on earth
That knows a poem’s excellence and worth
Or lack of it, -High Justice’s Commissar
Does look to “Sin-ed” yes “Sinned” as loveliest star.!.

AD MAJOREM DEI GLORIA
For the Greater Glory of God!


© Elizabeth Dandy









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Song for Dennis -'SINNED"

Contributed by Elizabeth_Dandy on Sunday, 19th February 2006 @ 08:11:05 PM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems








Note this! - a very precious bard he is,
Known by the pen name “Sinned” Dennis;-
‘Gainst modesty he never ever sinned,
Thus was endowed with Spirit, Pneuma, Wind!

So Modest, and so unobtrusively
He writes and posts his lovely poetry,
Is independent of excessive praise,
But leaves it to the Lord to have His ways.

And Sin,- he hardly ever did commit,
Lo! Sin on him just would not cling and sit.
He dedicates his work in praise of God,
And God does count the comment numbers not.

Nor does considers cliques that rove and roam
(We know the Lord is everywhere at home)
And for the Master’s greater glory t’ is
That “Sinned” does write, -this fortunate “Sinned” Dennis.

Far from the gracious Lord is cliquishness;
Who loves to see His bards autonomous,
At times beyond a poet sis or brother,
Who boost, acclaim, support alone each other.

Halt cliquishness, stop! halt! - lest it will spread
And spoil the rising dough for nurturing bread
Behold -the daily bread of poet -bard,
Who will be left with only rancid lard!

O’er shadowed by the busy site Elite
Sinned moves with faith, - we know from Holy Writ
That manifest will turn things on “that” day
When more than pious folks and poets pray..

Delivered from this comment counting he
From tedium and tribulation free
Can well devote his poems’ noble word
To praise, extol, to laud and thank the Lord!.

The races Winner is who writes for Him
Although the comments may be rare and slim
Dear Comment counters take ye heed- take heed!
T ‘is said the Lord does comments hardly read.:).

But Judge He is, in heaven and on earth
That knows a poem’s excellence and worth
Or lack of it, -High Justice’s Commissar
Does look to “Sin-ed” yes “Sinned” as loveliest star.!.

AD MAJOREM DEI GLORIA
For the Greater Glory of God!


© Elizabeth Dandy













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Re: Song for Dennis -'SINNED" (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Sunday, 19th February 2006 @ 09:19:01 PM AEST
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Interesting write, Elizabeth...
Hope all is well with you..
Hugs
Jenni


Re: Song for Dennis -'SINNED" (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Sunday, 19th February 2006 @ 09:46:15 PM AEST
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Sweet friend, Elizabeth. A beautifully penned dedication to such a wonderful and remarkable fellow poet and friend. Dennis is a very talented and gifted poet who is capable of producing very well penned and outstanding writes. Shine on my friend and thank u so much for sharing this great piece of poetry with us.
*warm love and hugs*
~sue~


Re: Song for Dennis -'SINNED" (User Rating: 1 )
by Sinned on Monday, 20th February 2006 @ 03:32:52 AM AEST
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Dear Elizabeth

The song you write I donot
sing
No !
I donot deserve such praise
I am but a human being
Simple yet,but by the
grace of God
He knows my soul
My every word
My thoughts and deed
He knows my sin
Any praise belongs to "Him"
Like Job I have raised my
fist
Where may I turn
I have cursed the dark
I have cursed the light
I thank you for every word
I donot deserve
"All praise to Christ and
I pray "He" heard


Elizabeth
You are to kind
Your distant friend

Dennis

Sinned


Re: Song for Dennis -'SINNED" (User Rating: 1 )
by sararose1950 on Tuesday, 21st February 2006 @ 08:22:52 PM AEST
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beautiful tribute Elizabeth! All poetry is a *gift* - a story to be told- be it light or dark- there is a reason for us to share it all- if just one person reads a poem and is touched by it , it is the greatest poem of all!!!
Peace and Light........Sara


Re: Song for Dennis -'SINNED" (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 24th February 2006 @ 06:00:22 PM AEST
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The races Winner is who writes for Him

But leaves it to the Lord to have His ways.

He dedicates his work in praise of God,
And God does count the comment numbers not.

Sinned moves with faith, - we know from Holy Writ

Does look to “Sin-ed” yes “Sinned” as loveliest star.!.


Elizabeth you have one loving deep heart, and oh how the tears flow reading this beautiful poem..thank you for writing for a beautiful friend, a person who is loved deeply on this site.. kind words for a kind human being.. from a kind human being..hugs... raquelLeah..




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