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Array ( [sid] => 115064 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Pain of Remembrance [time] => 2006-02-19 21:38:15 [hometext] => A soul remembered only in pain. [bodytext] => I sit so tight; it’s past midnight,
No light, no sight to purge my fright,
Nor image bright for my delight,
Instead, I might – I think I might, Just think of you, on such a stormy night.
It’s like déjà vu, yet skies were blue,
Last time the flowers bloomed, but now they gloom,
Portray a doom, so soon, in tune to the sounds of regret.
I fret; suspect that you have left,
Gone and slipped trough my net, and yet,
I cannot forget the nights we spent together.
Regardless of the weather, making love on the leather,
Your eyes sparkled and your beauty floated like a feather,
Yes, I remember, that love so tender.
Not you or I could render such bliss again, if not
To return to such splendor
Nothing could be better, ‘let her back’ I cry in pain,
But all is done in vein; it could never be the same,
Even if she came, the love has already been drained,
No longer sustained; noting left doth remain,
And so I sit here, drenched in pain and agony,
Sitting still and so regretfully,
All I do is ponder deeply, hoping you’ll come back to me,
And turn back to a time so happily,
Joyfully, wishfully picking roses unsuspectingly,
Loving you, you loving me,
Who am I to fool thee?
I betrayed you then, I could do it again
And so I stay and sit,
Till sunset’s lit
To rue another day,
Where thoughts would only betray
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Pain of Remembrance

Contributed by frankcube on Sunday, 19th February 2006 @ 09:38:15 PM in AEST
Topic: anguished



I sit so tight; it’s past midnight,
No light, no sight to purge my fright,
Nor image bright for my delight,
Instead, I might – I think I might, Just think of you, on such a stormy night.
It’s like déjà vu, yet skies were blue,
Last time the flowers bloomed, but now they gloom,
Portray a doom, so soon, in tune to the sounds of regret.
I fret; suspect that you have left,
Gone and slipped trough my net, and yet,
I cannot forget the nights we spent together.
Regardless of the weather, making love on the leather,
Your eyes sparkled and your beauty floated like a feather,
Yes, I remember, that love so tender.
Not you or I could render such bliss again, if not
To return to such splendor
Nothing could be better, ‘let her back’ I cry in pain,
But all is done in vein; it could never be the same,
Even if she came, the love has already been drained,
No longer sustained; noting left doth remain,
And so I sit here, drenched in pain and agony,
Sitting still and so regretfully,
All I do is ponder deeply, hoping you’ll come back to me,
And turn back to a time so happily,
Joyfully, wishfully picking roses unsuspectingly,
Loving you, you loving me,
Who am I to fool thee?
I betrayed you then, I could do it again
And so I stay and sit,
Till sunset’s lit
To rue another day,
Where thoughts would only betray




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Re: Pain of Remembrance (User Rating: 1 )
by VivreAmoureuxMourir on Sunday, 19th February 2006 @ 10:42:34 PM AEST
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This is so amazing!
It's bringing back memories
That I'd hoped were long forgotten.
Amazing..


Re: Pain of Remembrance (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Monday, 20th February 2006 @ 02:06:27 AM AEST
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wow amazing!! great job in expression I can relate ..

JENNI


Re: Pain of Remembrance (User Rating: 1 )
by Mangs on Monday, 20th February 2006 @ 05:56:57 AM AEST
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i love the way the words flow.....sounds much like rap.....


Re: Pain of Remembrance (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 20th February 2006 @ 07:38:02 AM AEST
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memories.. sometimes painful.. sit hold tight.. wondering if you will move on.. raquel leah


Re: Pain of Remembrance (User Rating: 1 )
by Packatack on Saturday, 29th April 2006 @ 05:47:59 AM AEST
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Wow again man, this ryhmes very well! can read wit a beat thats sounds great!!!
keep it up !!!




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