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You disappear into the night, till the next day
It seems that youíre always holding back things you have to say
I just wish youíd shine just a little ray
Of information for me to make this better

I can see this relationship go downhill
As each day passes, it gets damaged and bruised
Crying out for a cure
It doesnít need a band aid to cover the wound
Because only more feelings will be hidden, not revealed and shown
Sometimes I feel the urge to pick up that phone
Just to hear your voice and tone
After Iíd tell you and youíd tell me everything
Everything thatís needs to be known, that needs to be shown

Thereís always just that one question
If Iíll ever understand what youíre feeling
And if youíll every understand what Iím feeling
But thatíll never be known, if we donít show and tell these hidden emotions

So hereís the time
Tell me and Iíll tell you
Confess
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Confess

Contributed by the_young_poet on Saturday, 27th January 2007 @ 11:04:01 PM in AEST
Topic: secrets



Night falls as the sun fades away
You disappear into the night, till the next day
It seems that youíre always holding back things you have to say
I just wish youíd shine just a little ray
Of information for me to make this better

I can see this relationship go downhill
As each day passes, it gets damaged and bruised
Crying out for a cure
It doesnít need a band aid to cover the wound
Because only more feelings will be hidden, not revealed and shown
Sometimes I feel the urge to pick up that phone
Just to hear your voice and tone
After Iíd tell you and youíd tell me everything
Everything thatís needs to be known, that needs to be shown

Thereís always just that one question
If Iíll ever understand what youíre feeling
And if youíll every understand what Iím feeling
But thatíll never be known, if we donít show and tell these hidden emotions

So hereís the time
Tell me and Iíll tell you
Confess




Copyright © the_young_poet ... [ 2007-01-27 23:04:01]
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Re: Confess (User Rating: 1 )
by ferasdour on Saturday, 27th January 2007 @ 11:55:46 PM AEST
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if one writes a poem there is nothing more needed to be confessed. besides, confessing is to much work.


i enjoyed this poem.


Re: Confess (User Rating: 1 )
by inlovewithaladd on Sunday, 28th January 2007 @ 12:56:08 AM AEST
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this was enjoyable, though not excellent. i think it's lacking the use of all senses, though that could really be more my taste in poetry than anything else. thank you for writing!




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