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Array ( [sid] => 132997 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Release [time] => 2007-03-23 21:31:02 [hometext] => [bodytext] => In
The day

In the night

When you finally give up the fight

When your heart is broken

You canít see the light

heart so tight

You die every night

When itís late at night


One day you will see the light

Your heart is no longer broken

No longer tight

Just look inwards and see the light

Shining bright

Trust me I know

You will be all right

I died every night
After that fight

Now you mean nothing

Nothing to me

I no longer die

every night

I can see the light

Trust me I know youíll be all right

No longer a fight

Now its over

I know I am going to be

All right
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 173 [topic] => 61 [informant] => itsnotme [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )
Release

Contributed by itsnotme on Friday, 23rd March 2007 @ 09:31:02 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles



In
The day

In the night

When you finally give up the fight

When your heart is broken

You canít see the light

heart so tight

You die every night

When itís late at night


One day you will see the light

Your heart is no longer broken

No longer tight

Just look inwards and see the light

Shining bright

Trust me I know

You will be all right

I died every night
After that fight

Now you mean nothing

Nothing to me

I no longer die

every night

I can see the light

Trust me I know youíll be all right

No longer a fight

Now its over

I know I am going to be

All right




Copyright © itsnotme ... [ 2007-03-23 21:31:02]
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Re: Release (User Rating: 1 )
by artjunkiekyle on Friday, 23rd March 2007 @ 10:13:05 PM AEST
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congratulations on overcoming your struggles. this poem seems to reflect you and your personality quite well as a very strong person. thanks for posting.

-kyle


Re: Release (User Rating: 1 )
by Sena on Friday, 23rd March 2007 @ 11:11:03 PM AEST
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very expressive...I can relate.


Re: Release (User Rating: 1 )
by needledancing on Friday, 23rd March 2007 @ 11:25:00 PM AEST
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Wow..living proof we can get over it...I've been saying that for awhile now...I love this work..inspiration and hard facts....look at you you survived...thank you I needed you here.




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