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Array ( [sid] => 143340 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Make a Wish [time] => 2008-06-19 06:21:20 [hometext] => This is for a girl very special to me. Kara Leigh <3, my bestfriend. P.S There is a deleted line in the song, due to suggestive content. [bodytext] => Make A Wish


Kara said make a wish
so I wish things would go right
for once in my life.

Kara said don't let any one stop you
from achieving your dream
thats so true too, know what I mean?

So I'm writing this as a thank you to you

Something I've should have done along time ago
I mistreated you, I was mean to you
You were always nice and you trusted me
but I told Brittany what you told me
I know living in the past
but I need something to write about
and your my topic now
I mean that in a goodway too

You gave me so much inspiration
you gave me concertration
I hope we don't have any issues
I hate to have another confertation
like in 07, but It's 08
So I think I'm move on with the date

Lets make this the best year for both of us indivually
So much has happend between you and me persoanlly
you've been there to help me mentally
you've been there to help me phsyically
now people are going to take that the wrong way
but you know what I'm trying to say

I love you kid

End

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Make a Wish

Contributed by StevenCollins on Thursday, 19th June 2008 @ 06:21:20 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



Make A Wish


Kara said make a wish
so I wish things would go right
for once in my life.

Kara said don't let any one stop you
from achieving your dream
thats so true too, know what I mean?

So I'm writing this as a thank you to you

Something I've should have done along time ago
I mistreated you, I was mean to you
You were always nice and you trusted me
but I told Brittany what you told me
I know living in the past
but I need something to write about
and your my topic now
I mean that in a goodway too

You gave me so much inspiration
you gave me concertration
I hope we don't have any issues
I hate to have another confertation
like in 07, but It's 08
So I think I'm move on with the date

Lets make this the best year for both of us indivually
So much has happend between you and me persoanlly
you've been there to help me mentally
you've been there to help me phsyically
now people are going to take that the wrong way
but you know what I'm trying to say

I love you kid

End





Copyright © StevenCollins ... [ 2008-06-19 06:21:20]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Make a Wish (User Rating: 1 )
by Chrissylee on Thursday, 19th June 2008 @ 03:05:11 PM AEST
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this is a great tribute poem to have written and i hope things go better for you both now. great write


Re: Make a Wish (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Thursday, 19th June 2008 @ 07:19:59 PM AEST
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A lovely tribute to your best friend.... Good luck with everything..
Jenni




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